The Dream
The morning after.....66 total reviews
Comment from Gail Denham
A pleasant poem of love. But was it just a dream. Blessed are those who hold onto such love for a lifetime. such love takes work on the part of both parties.
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2019
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A pleasant poem of love. But was it just a dream. Blessed are those who hold onto such love for a lifetime. such love takes work on the part of both parties.
Comment Written 09-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2019
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Thank you so much! Sometimes just having been inspired fills the heart with joy forever! That is what one precious man did for me! :). Appreciate your review!
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hi Diana: I am no hand at writing romantic poems. I'm not good at writing a lot of things but I'm really no good at writing romantic poems. I like this one very much. This certainly struck me as a dream scene as you wrote it. In the last stanza and the last two lines I read them over a few times to myself. To my tin ear, I liked it without the word "still." That was just my own preference. It is a wonderful poem. -Robert-
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2019
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Hi Diana: I am no hand at writing romantic poems. I'm not good at writing a lot of things but I'm really no good at writing romantic poems. I like this one very much. This certainly struck me as a dream scene as you wrote it. In the last stanza and the last two lines I read them over a few times to myself. To my tin ear, I liked it without the word "still." That was just my own preference. It is a wonderful poem. -Robert-
Comment Written 09-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2019
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thank you again for stopping in reading in commenting! The feedback The feedback just makes my heart just makes my heart leap with joy!!! I?ll look at your suggestion and see if it would change my flow! Hugs!
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You're welcome.
Comment from nancyjam
I enjoyed reading your lovely poem about
a love that is remembered, and treasured
even though the person is no longer here.
Dreams can seem so real and bring comfort long after the
sun awakens the dreamer.
Good luck in the contest.
Nancy
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2019
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I enjoyed reading your lovely poem about
a love that is remembered, and treasured
even though the person is no longer here.
Dreams can seem so real and bring comfort long after the
sun awakens the dreamer.
Good luck in the contest.
Nancy
Comment Written 09-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2019
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Thank you for taking time reading and commenting on my work! I am beyond excited to be participating on this poetry site !!
Comment from Patty Palmer
What a comforting poem! It speaks of tenderness and gentleness the entire way through! The way it flows so softly.
Yep I like this poem! Good luck in the contest!
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What a comforting poem! It speaks of tenderness and gentleness the entire way through! The way it flows so softly.
Yep I like this poem! Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 09-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2019
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Thank so much for your generous review! Even though the contest closing is a ways off, I?m excited to see how it fairs! Hugs!
Comment from Heather Knight
I love this, in particular the last stanza. For some reason, I like short lines, so that's one of the things I like about your poem.
Very romantic and well-written.
Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2019
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I love this, in particular the last stanza. For some reason, I like short lines, so that's one of the things I like about your poem.
Very romantic and well-written.
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 09-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2019
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Thank you so much! I think short line poems are easier for one to read and follow myself! Even though more complicated poems are often beautifully done, I think shorter lines appeal to a far wider crowd of poetry lovers :). Have a blessed day!
Comment from LIJ Red
Sometimes while waking the brain and body forget that the one who should be beside you is long dead...hopefully children, new love or career are there to fill the yawning emptiness....I might have made this octameter couplets rather than short lines...not significant, just a thought...excellent poem.
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2019
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Sometimes while waking the brain and body forget that the one who should be beside you is long dead...hopefully children, new love or career are there to fill the yawning emptiness....I might have made this octameter couplets rather than short lines...not significant, just a thought...excellent poem.
Comment Written 09-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2019
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Thank you for reading and your comments! What an interesting way to perceive this! It amazes me what others see from the image created! Thank you also for your suggestion!
Comment from jenintorre
What a lovely romantic poem this is. I'm not sure whether it was a dream or reminiscing about the night before, either way it provoked very happy feelings of love and I really enjoyed reading it. Take care. Jen.
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2019
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What a lovely romantic poem this is. I'm not sure whether it was a dream or reminiscing about the night before, either way it provoked very happy feelings of love and I really enjoyed reading it. Take care. Jen.
Comment Written 09-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2019
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Thank you so very much! I?m so happy you are able to see it both ways! This was not my intention, but I?m thrilled it is perceived that way! You may choose which ever idea you like :).
Comment from Hitcher
Sometimes we have dreams that feel so real we can convince ours selves that they were and other times things can happen that are so intense and moving we can wake and think it was a dream. Your poem works either way as far as I can see. Very nice indeed !
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2019
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Sometimes we have dreams that feel so real we can convince ours selves that they were and other times things can happen that are so intense and moving we can wake and think it was a dream. Your poem works either way as far as I can see. Very nice indeed !
Comment Written 09-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2019
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Thank you very much for taking time to read and comment! I appreciate your opinion on the versatility I didn?t even realize it offered!
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem about the morning after the love making of the night, when we look back at how we were treated we know we are loved and we love too.
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2019
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A very well-written poem about the morning after the love making of the night, when we look back at how we were treated we know we are loved and we love too.
Comment Written 03-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2019
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Thank you for taking time to read and so glad you appreciated this. 🥰
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
The sunlight woke you up in the morning but you continued remembering the love moments and how you loved her all those days in her absence; well said, well done. Write to inspire, change -- DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2019
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The sunlight woke you up in the morning but you continued remembering the love moments and how you loved her all those days in her absence; well said, well done. Write to inspire, change -- DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 03-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2019
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☺️ actually im the girl and he?s the one who departed 🤣. Thank you for reading and appreciating my work.😘
