The Dream
The morning after.....66 total reviews
Comment from rspoet
Hello Diana,
This is an lovely poem for the rhyming contest
that would also be a excellent poem for a love poem contest.
The imagery is excellent especially the essence of touch
and the fragility of the heart.
Wonderful art work and presentation.
Very well done
Good luck in the contest
Robert
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2019
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Hello Diana,
This is an lovely poem for the rhyming contest
that would also be a excellent poem for a love poem contest.
The imagery is excellent especially the essence of touch
and the fragility of the heart.
Wonderful art work and presentation.
Very well done
Good luck in the contest
Robert
Comment Written 18-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2019
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thanks Robert, it is definitely one if not my favorite one I've ever written. so grateful for your encouraging review of it! :) xoxo
Comment from victor 66
This is a very sincere and most endearing poem. Yes, I believe in love that lasts long after the death of a loved one. I won't forget because I can't forget... and then there's, I don't want to forget. Best wishes.
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2019
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This is a very sincere and most endearing poem. Yes, I believe in love that lasts long after the death of a loved one. I won't forget because I can't forget... and then there's, I don't want to forget. Best wishes.
Comment Written 10-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2019
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Thank you so much for your review! And you said that all so perfectly. I guess this is my way to never forget :)
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You are most welcome, Diana. Take care.
Comment from Gypsymooncat
This lovely poem reminded me of similar dreams I experienced some years ago. Sometimes we only find our "true love" in dreamscapes, but I guess that's better than not at all. I enjoyed the wistful feel of this, and also how it had a dreamy feel to it, which truly complemented the content. Thanks for sharing! xoxox
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2019
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This lovely poem reminded me of similar dreams I experienced some years ago. Sometimes we only find our "true love" in dreamscapes, but I guess that's better than not at all. I enjoyed the wistful feel of this, and also how it had a dreamy feel to it, which truly complemented the content. Thanks for sharing! xoxox
Comment Written 10-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2019
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Thank you so much for your precious comment! You are so right! Sometimes we feel even what the lover cannot and how sad for them! But thankfully, feelings are meant to be felt by our hearts, not whether someone else feels them too! Appreciate that you enjoyed!
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That's so true too! If we felt it, then we were blessed. It doesn't have to be two way. And it was no problem enjoying the poem!
Comment from tfawcus
I loved the sensitivity and depth of this reflective poem which defines so much of what love is really all about.
It is beautifully expressed in free verse. If you PM Tom, he could perhaps get it transferred from the Rhyming Poem contest to the Free Verse Contest that closes in five days time.
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2019
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I loved the sensitivity and depth of this reflective poem which defines so much of what love is really all about.
It is beautifully expressed in free verse. If you PM Tom, he could perhaps get it transferred from the Rhyming Poem contest to the Free Verse Contest that closes in five days time.
Comment Written 10-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2019
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Thank you for your wonderful comment! I appreciate that you enjoyed! While I am honored by your suggestion, I already have one submitted in Free Verse contest. And even though its shorter, I do hope you will be able to tell which is mine if you vote in that contest! Hugs!
Comment from bob cullen
Wow, that is so beautiful. And you've never even met me, just joking. You have some amazing phrases here. E.g. 'Through my window came it's stream.' & 'My thoughts- they had no sleep.' Quite simply breathtaking. A great poem.
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2019
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Wow, that is so beautiful. And you've never even met me, just joking. You have some amazing phrases here. E.g. 'Through my window came it's stream.' & 'My thoughts- they had no sleep.' Quite simply breathtaking. A great poem.
Comment Written 10-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2019
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Ha! Funny! You are so precious! Thank you for checking my work out too! I?m so happy you enjoyed! Hugs!
Comment from Dean Kuch
What a wonderfully well penned poetic proclamation portraying passion, pure love and romance, Diana.
I loved someone this much...once.
It hasn't been too long ago that I don't remember what it felt like.
But, like all good things it finally came to an end.
Unlucky at love, lucky in life, I guess.
Best wishes to you in the Rhyming Poem contest.
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2019
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What a wonderfully well penned poetic proclamation portraying passion, pure love and romance, Diana.
I loved someone this much...once.
It hasn't been too long ago that I don't remember what it felt like.
But, like all good things it finally came to an end.
Unlucky at love, lucky in life, I guess.
Best wishes to you in the Rhyming Poem contest.
Comment Written 10-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2019
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Thank you Dean! It is the loss of any woman that would pass you by! You may write some scary stuff, but deep down I feel there is a sweetly spiritual person in there! My prayer for you is that one day again, your heart will be appreciated! Thank you again for taking time to read my work! Your comments are precious!
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You're right, Diana.
I'm nothing like the horrifying things I write about.
My writing simply defines my tastes in literature and in no way defines who I am as a person.
I love all things horror--it's the genre that gets my blood pumping.
For some, it's romance. While others enjoy commentary.
To each their own, right?
Good luck to you! ~ Dean
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I am a fan of horror as well, just not good at writing it. So glad you are!
Comment from Bichon
Oh wow, this poem was just amazing. You conveyed personal emotions in the poem and they translated excellently. Great job I really liked this one for sure,
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2019
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Oh wow, this poem was just amazing. You conveyed personal emotions in the poem and they translated excellently. Great job I really liked this one for sure,
Comment Written 10-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2019
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Thank you! Nothing more fulfilling than love in the spiritual
level :) appreciate your kind words and review! Love your user name too!
Comment from June Sargent
This lovely piece can be interpreted on many different levels. Whether dream or reality, it speaks to a love that is eternal and will continue to comfort even in his absence. Very sweet.
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2019
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This lovely piece can be interpreted on many different levels. Whether dream or reality, it speaks to a love that is eternal and will continue to comfort even in his absence. Very sweet.
Comment Written 10-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2019
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Thank you so much for checking it out and commenting! This is the level of love we were meant to live at! Appreciate your kind words! Be blessed!
Comment from Ulla
Awe, that's a lovely free verse love poem. You remember the love you shared and now you miss his touch and his being there so much. I loved your poem. All best. Ulla:))
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2019
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Awe, that's a lovely free verse love poem. You remember the love you shared and now you miss his touch and his being there so much. I loved your poem. All best. Ulla:))
Comment Written 10-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2019
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Thank you very much for stopping and checking it out! Makes my heart sing at all of the wonderful people on this site! I am honored that you love it!
Comment from Sophia Delgado
I love the way you formatted this poem. It's so heartfelt and the ending ties it up perfectly.
One thing: did you mean "My thoughts-/They had no sleep"? Just wondering since "they" is plural.
Thank you for sharing!
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2019
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I love the way you formatted this poem. It's so heartfelt and the ending ties it up perfectly.
One thing: did you mean "My thoughts-/They had no sleep"? Just wondering since "they" is plural.
Thank you for sharing!
Comment Written 10-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2019
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Yes, thank you! I have made the correction! Appreciate you catching that! Honored you read and commented!
