Love's Light
Love has arrived...34 total reviews
Comment from Thomas Bowling
The problem with trying to find true love at night is they may not appear the same in the light of day. That's why romantic restaurants are dimly lit. My advice is if you're seeking love carry a flashlight.
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2019
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The problem with trying to find true love at night is they may not appear the same in the light of day. That's why romantic restaurants are dimly lit. My advice is if you're seeking love carry a flashlight.
Comment Written 02-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2019
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LoL! That?s hilarious! I love your witty feedback!! Thanks for reading Tom! Tomorrow night, I catch up on Catherine! xoxo
Comment from BeasPeas
Hi Diana. This is another very nice poem. Sometimes we find lover right under our nose, where and when we least expect it. You can edit the long line here: "Now we walk-he and I and He makes our short time"
Click the edit button and add a space at the end of "I" to create the fourth line, then hit the "save" button:
"Now we walk-he and I
and He makes our short time
The sweetest you'll
Find in the night."
Marilyn
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2019
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Hi Diana. This is another very nice poem. Sometimes we find lover right under our nose, where and when we least expect it. You can edit the long line here: "Now we walk-he and I and He makes our short time"
Click the edit button and add a space at the end of "I" to create the fourth line, then hit the "save" button:
"Now we walk-he and I
and He makes our short time
The sweetest you'll
Find in the night."
Marilyn
Comment Written 01-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2019
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😘 thank you!
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Unfortunately, the first line is too long and will not edit it as you suggest. It still puts the ?I? into the second line. The space allowed is not able to support all characters in first line on one line 😢
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I wasn't sure if you knew how to edit your work since you just joined the site, that's why I mentioned it. :)
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Absolutely appreciated! I think I?m getting the hang of it now!😍🙏🏼
Comment from robyn corum
Diana,
What an odd and unusual rhyme scheme! I really don't think I have ever seen a poem done quite this way. *smile* That's an amazing feat -- after being on this site for so many years and reading thousands of poems~! hahaha
Thanks and good luck!
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2019
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Diana,
What an odd and unusual rhyme scheme! I really don't think I have ever seen a poem done quite this way. *smile* That's an amazing feat -- after being on this site for so many years and reading thousands of poems~! hahaha
Thanks and good luck!
Comment Written 01-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2019
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Thank you I have tried to make each of my poems or prose or lyrics a little different from the one before. No time for the boring ☺️🤣🥰
Comment from Patty Palmer
You wrote about looking for love at the light house, Looking for love in all the wrong places. But he did find you near the light house. I do like your poem and I love lighthouses!
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reply by the author on 01-Jun-2019
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You wrote about looking for love at the light house, Looking for love in all the wrong places. But he did find you near the light house. I do like your poem and I love lighthouses!
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Comment Written 01-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2019
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Thank you me too light houses are my favorite and being near the water is so inspiring for me
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Oh I know, we go to the lake every year on vacation. We live about an hour from Lake Erie We spend an entire. The first glimpse I get pf the Lake where you can't see anything but water and the horizon. It takes my breath away1
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🥰🙏🏼
