Love's Light
Love has arrived...34 total reviews
Comment from kahpot
Well I love, Love and this is love, whether waiting, expecting, looking, or found, ( the one thing I would do is get rid of ( ) around, "I was told long ago" this line stands by itself, I will listen to the video later as to me it cannot enhance this work anymore, very well done, your chosen artwork is superb ****kahpot
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2019
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Well I love, Love and this is love, whether waiting, expecting, looking, or found, ( the one thing I would do is get rid of ( ) around, "I was told long ago" this line stands by itself, I will listen to the video later as to me it cannot enhance this work anymore, very well done, your chosen artwork is superb ****kahpot
Comment Written 09-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2019
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Your helpful suggestion is greatly appreciated! And as promised it?s the first of the month! Xoxo
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Your helpful suggestion is greatly appreciated! And as promised it?s the first of the month! Xoxo
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"Love's Light", is an extremely well-written and delightfully descriptive piece. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. To me, this is a six, but unfortunately I only have fives left. I look forward to seeing your next post.
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2019
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"Love's Light", is an extremely well-written and delightfully descriptive piece. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. To me, this is a six, but unfortunately I only have fives left. I look forward to seeing your next post.
Comment Written 09-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2019
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Thank you Duchess this is one of my most favorite poems! I really do enjoy writing love stories for sure! xoxo
Diana, as always, you're more than welcome.
God bless and take care,
the Duchess !(-_-)!
Comment from Hitcher
Well now, they do say that, everything comes to those who wait, that patience is a virtue and that love will conquer all. I say, when it lands...Bask in its beauty and keep those fires burning. Nice!
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2019
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Well now, they do say that, everything comes to those who wait, that patience is a virtue and that love will conquer all. I say, when it lands...Bask in its beauty and keep those fires burning. Nice!
Comment Written 09-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2019
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Thank you so much I appreciated that you stopped and read it I?m glad that you enjoyed it and for your encouragement! xoxo
Comment from Neonewman
This is an awesome entry for this Rhyming Poetry Contest you have crafted well. The artwork pairs well with your craft and paints a beautiful picture.
God bless
Steve
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2019
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This is an awesome entry for this Rhyming Poetry Contest you have crafted well. The artwork pairs well with your craft and paints a beautiful picture.
God bless
Steve
Comment Written 09-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2019
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Thank you so much. I appreciate your feedback of encouragement! xoxo
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My pleasure.
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your smoothly-flowing poem is sweet, uplifting, and romantic--vividly describing love as a powerful force that rescues a person who is experiencing his/her worst times.
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2019
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Your smoothly-flowing poem is sweet, uplifting, and romantic--vividly describing love as a powerful force that rescues a person who is experiencing his/her worst times.
Comment Written 08-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2019
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Thank you Janice! I hope it was easy to follow the melodic beat I was trying to create in each stanza! I appreciate your precious comment xoxo
Comment from Darlene Franklin
I like the story, of how he finds her stumbling in the dark when shes been searching. The rhyming is consistent and accurate, but it doesn't work to strong effect. Some stanzas have rhyming lines (or almst rhyming), some don't, and the final lines of t he stanza are all of different lengths, so that it almost feels accidental. But that just might be my personal opinion. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2019
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I like the story, of how he finds her stumbling in the dark when shes been searching. The rhyming is consistent and accurate, but it doesn't work to strong effect. Some stanzas have rhyming lines (or almst rhyming), some don't, and the final lines of t he stanza are all of different lengths, so that it almost feels accidental. But that just might be my personal opinion. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 08-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2019
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Thank you! I guess its all in how you read it as I wrote with a flow for each stanza! I hope its not too awkward to read - Yikes! Appreciate your review and for spending time reading! xoxo
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I wrote a poem today that I have the same questions about. Just Right - if you could at it, perhaps we can help each other. Or not. The poem is good.
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I guess I wrote this with a melodic structure like
Dadada badada
Badada Dadada
Dadada Badada
Badada
If that makes any sense LoL!
Is yours posted now? Let me know title xoxo
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I posted it for a club entry, haven't promoted it. It's "Just Right," an ekphrastic poem. And Thanks!
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Haha! I thought you meant the lyrical one! I?ll go look at this one also xoxo
Comment from Val Crisson
Lovely. I am not much of rhyming poet, but I did like the flow of this one. It captured my attention. I thought the rhyme in last line of each stanza was quite well used, and not the least bit over done. The topic of finding love and it being exactly right was a bit trite, but I think you pulled it off with the fear of failure to find true love. I believe you've found your Prince Charming here.
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2019
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Lovely. I am not much of rhyming poet, but I did like the flow of this one. It captured my attention. I thought the rhyme in last line of each stanza was quite well used, and not the least bit over done. The topic of finding love and it being exactly right was a bit trite, but I think you pulled it off with the fear of failure to find true love. I believe you've found your Prince Charming here.
Comment Written 08-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2019
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Thank you! Appreciate sincerely that took time to read and leave an opinion!!! xoxo
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No problem
Comment from CrystieCookie999
Wow, what a lyrical poem! I especially like the last two stanzas. And I just looked at your profile and see you do indeed have a lyric-writing background. I think I would put a comma after the word "panicked." Thank you for sharing your talented writing here!
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2019
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Wow, what a lyrical poem! I especially like the last two stanzas. And I just looked at your profile and see you do indeed have a lyric-writing background. I think I would put a comma after the word "panicked." Thank you for sharing your talented writing here!
Comment Written 08-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2019
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Ok awesome! I?ll check that! Thanks so much for your precious review! It is sincerely appreciated.
Comment from Sallyo
Cleaver piece with the ight rhyme ending for each stanza. This could probably be spun into a song if you have musical skills. Gorgeous picture, too. It's a bit of a mystery...vampire?
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2019
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Cleaver piece with the ight rhyme ending for each stanza. This could probably be spun into a song if you have musical skills. Gorgeous picture, too. It's a bit of a mystery...vampire?
Comment Written 02-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2019
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Thanks much! I do wish I want musically talented enough to set words to many lyrics I?ve written that maybe one day I can share more of. Not many here try lyrical pieces very often. And I like the vamp idea!! xoxo
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Our search for our soul mate reaches far and wide and then suddenly someone walks into our life and everything changes, I loved your warm loving words here, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2019
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Our search for our soul mate reaches far and wide and then suddenly someone walks into our life and everything changes, I loved your warm loving words here, love Dolly x
Comment Written 02-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2019
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Honored Dolly! xoxoxo
