Love's Light
Love has arrived...34 total reviews
Comment from karenina
I had to click on this one...the image reminded me of every romance novel I've ever set eyes on! Unlike romance novels, however, your poem had a depth and meter to it that captivated fully. How many of us have spent the better part of our lives looking for just such a love? Very nice...Karenina
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2019
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I had to click on this one...the image reminded me of every romance novel I've ever set eyes on! Unlike romance novels, however, your poem had a depth and meter to it that captivated fully. How many of us have spent the better part of our lives looking for just such a love? Very nice...Karenina
Comment Written 09-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2019
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Yes now that I look at it you?re so right! It looks like the cover of a Harlequin romance book! So glad that you stop by to read it and for leaving me your wonderful feedback! xoxo
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I went through a phase in my late twenties when I read one of those a week (at least!)---the cover brought back memories of how EVERY one I read had the phrase "He stood with arms akimbo." in it! Cracked me up!--Karenina
Comment from Ogden
You certainly nailed all the rhymes, to say how you finally came away with the "light" you fell for. If this is non-fiction, congratulations! Otherwise, good luck in the contest, Diana.
Don
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2019
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You certainly nailed all the rhymes, to say how you finally came away with the "light" you fell for. If this is non-fiction, congratulations! Otherwise, good luck in the contest, Diana.
Don
Comment Written 09-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2019
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Thank you so much for stopping and reading my poem! It is a bit fictitious, but it comes from a place of nonfiction sentiment! Appreciate that you left your feedback for me and enjoyed it. xoxo
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This meets the contest requirements beautifully as you deliver a well penned Rhymed Verse. The content is well executed as the imagery evokes vivid and visceral emotions in the reader. Good luck in the judging and thank you very much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2019
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This meets the contest requirements beautifully as you deliver a well penned Rhymed Verse. The content is well executed as the imagery evokes vivid and visceral emotions in the reader. Good luck in the judging and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 09-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2019
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Thank you M! Your opinion is always appreciated and I?m so glad that you enjoyed it! I don?t write very often in the style of rhyme but it was fun to do! Have a really great weekend! xoxo
Comment from the13thpoet
Hello and a happy Friday to you Diana. I enjoyed reading your poem, thanks for sharing. I liked the rhythm and rhyme of the poem. Good job and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2019
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Hello and a happy Friday to you Diana. I enjoyed reading your poem, thanks for sharing. I liked the rhythm and rhyme of the poem. Good job and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 09-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2019
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Thank you so much! this was a lot of fun to write! I appreciate that you enjoyed it and let me feedback letting me know so! xoxo
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written love poem. We sometimes don't know when and where we will find love's light. When it comes to us when we least expect it, we are surprised with delight.
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2019
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A very well-written love poem. We sometimes don't know when and where we will find love's light. When it comes to us when we least expect it, we are surprised with delight.
Comment Written 09-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2019
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Exactly! That?s the best kind is when you are not expecting it And have given up finding it! Thank you so much for reading and for letting me know that you enjoyed it! xoxo
Comment from Sally Law
Wow, someone is stirred up these days. I feel this is fresh from your heart, dear Diana. Beautifully penned and aptly illustrated. I felt inspired and enjoyed listening to the beautiful piano music. It's so romantic and befitting your poem.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sally xo
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2019
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Wow, someone is stirred up these days. I feel this is fresh from your heart, dear Diana. Beautifully penned and aptly illustrated. I felt inspired and enjoyed listening to the beautiful piano music. It's so romantic and befitting your poem.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sally xo
Comment Written 09-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2019
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Figure funny! This was actually a piece I wrote quite a while ago but I thought it fit perfectly as an entry for this contest! I?m so glad that you enjoyed it! Have a great weekend my friend! xoxo
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Storing them up for us, aye? I have a few but waiting for FanStory moola to promote them all. Sigh. It?s all good. At least we don?t have writer?s block. LOL ! XO
Comment from A. Willow Bends
Grrr. No sixes! Well, this is absolutely fantastic. Intense, loaded with emotion, sexy, enticing. What more can I say? Visual chosen is perfect.
You really do an excellent job in ALL areas, my friend. Love reading your work! Perfection. Do not change a single bit!
Wendy
Favorite stanza -gentle hands reaching out to heal my plight YES!
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2019
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Grrr. No sixes! Well, this is absolutely fantastic. Intense, loaded with emotion, sexy, enticing. What more can I say? Visual chosen is perfect.
You really do an excellent job in ALL areas, my friend. Love reading your work! Perfection. Do not change a single bit!
Wendy
Favorite stanza -gentle hands reaching out to heal my plight YES!
Comment Written 09-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2019
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Awe!!! You are so precious! I?m really happy that you enjoyed it! And we all know that basically with the scarcity of those sixes, It?s the heartfelt enjoyment that means the most! Have an awesome weekend! Xoxo
Comment from Janetsue
This is a beautiful posting about believing that the right moment will come and Love will appear. It is written well with deep emotion evident in the lines leading the reader to a lovely ending. Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2019
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This is a beautiful posting about believing that the right moment will come and Love will appear. It is written well with deep emotion evident in the lines leading the reader to a lovely ending. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 09-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2019
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Thank you so much! It makes me so happy with people enjoy my work! It makes all the effort put in mean so much more! Have a great weekend! Xoxo
Comment from dragonpoet
It seems the speaker really didn't have to go searching for love. It found her when she most needed it. Kindness is always a good start to a relationship. This could be about faith too.
Good luck in the contest. Keep writing
dragonpoet
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2019
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It seems the speaker really didn't have to go searching for love. It found her when she most needed it. Kindness is always a good start to a relationship. This could be about faith too.
Good luck in the contest. Keep writing
dragonpoet
Comment Written 09-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2019
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Yes sometimes with us and Fred and then give up and then that?s when the magic happens! Appreciate you stop to read and that you enjoyed it! It means so much to me! Have a very good weekend! xoxo
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You're welcome.
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Comment from June Sargent
It is a journey, isn't it? This search for love's light. And we may stumble and panic along the way, but just when all seems hopeless, it finds us. Beautiful piece. Should do well in the contest.
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2019
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It is a journey, isn't it? This search for love's light. And we may stumble and panic along the way, but just when all seems hopeless, it finds us. Beautiful piece. Should do well in the contest.
Comment Written 09-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2019
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Thank you so much June! These poems just flows so naturally for me I just love writing about love and the human heart! Appreciate that you left me for feedback on this! xoxo
