Love's Light
Love has arrived...34 total reviews
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
Your poem portrays a lovely search and path to love and comes to fruition with your artful words. The art compliments the poem. And I know he's the one that forever will be the keeper of my loves light... is such a lovely verse.
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2019
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Your poem portrays a lovely search and path to love and comes to fruition with your artful words. The art compliments the poem. And I know he's the one that forever will be the keeper of my loves light... is such a lovely verse.
Comment Written 10-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2019
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Thank you so much! I?m so happy you enjoyed! Xoxo
Comment from LeftHandedScribe
You are a true poet Diana. I can easily see this piece being put to music. The struggle of finding love is so well paid off when our heroine find her person. Thank you for your open heart and vivid soul.
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2019
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You are a true poet Diana. I can easily see this piece being put to music. The struggle of finding love is so well paid off when our heroine find her person. Thank you for your open heart and vivid soul.
Comment Written 10-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2019
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Thank you my dear I?m so happy that you are appreciated this one!
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Thank you my dear I?m so happy that you are appreciated this one!
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
This poem is beautiful. The picture is so romantic, too. I can see why I'm a fan of yours. How long does it take for you to compose a poem? I notice that you've been writing for several years. (40)
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2019
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This poem is beautiful. The picture is so romantic, too. I can see why I'm a fan of yours. How long does it take for you to compose a poem? I notice that you've been writing for several years. (40)
Comment Written 10-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2019
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Thank you so much I appreciate your support like that you just don?t even know! Sometimes things just come to my mind and maybe take an hour and other times it might be several hours because I have to put it down and come back and put it down and come back! This site definitely challenges me in many ways but I do love to write melodic poetry! I sincerely appreciate your encouragement! xoxo
Comment from Agate Lucas
Very touching poem about love, and full of hope! The metaphorical story you tell is well-led and engaging, but my only comment is that there are maybe some repetitions that you could avoid. The rhythm really flows, good job!
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reply by the author on 11-Aug-2019
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Very touching poem about love, and full of hope! The metaphorical story you tell is well-led and engaging, but my only comment is that there are maybe some repetitions that you could avoid. The rhythm really flows, good job!
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Comment Written 10-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2019
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Thank you I definitely appreciate you stopping to read it into giving me your feedback on it! xo
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, Love's Light, has a progressive set of quatrains that each end with a uni-rhyming word that leads us to the success of the seeker to find the elusive love. Nice.
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2019
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This poem, Love's Light, has a progressive set of quatrains that each end with a uni-rhyming word that leads us to the success of the seeker to find the elusive love. Nice.
Comment Written 10-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2019
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Thanks Bill! It?s not a style I normally write in but I thought it fun to try it! Appreciate that you stop by and read it today! xoxo
Comment from misscookie
I have no more stars to give.
I love the artwork you choose to go with your poem, they are a perfect match.
You captured my attention from the first line to the last, Your poem reminded me of a a cool stream moving in silent until it approaches a water fall only to overcome a mild stream again.
Thank you for sharing
Cookie
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2019
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I have no more stars to give.
I love the artwork you choose to go with your poem, they are a perfect match.
You captured my attention from the first line to the last, Your poem reminded me of a a cool stream moving in silent until it approaches a water fall only to overcome a mild stream again.
Thank you for sharing
Cookie
Comment Written 10-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2019
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Thank you so much! Believe me I understand about the stars we need way more to give out! But what?s more important is that you appreciated the peace and enjoyed reading it! it?s like with the reviewer nominations, we just don?t get enough. xoxo
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Your very welcome no we don't get enough for the amount of person on this site
Have a nice day.
Cookie
Comment from Nike23
I like your poem. Your word choice is descriptive and vivid. I like the rhyme scheme. Your words causes the reader to form images in their minds. Good luck and good job.
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2019
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I like your poem. Your word choice is descriptive and vivid. I like the rhyme scheme. Your words causes the reader to form images in their minds. Good luck and good job.
Comment Written 10-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2019
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Thanks much for your review and for stopping by to read it! I?m so glad that you enjoyed it. xoxo
Comment from godlucifer
you define love strictly romantically. correct me if i'm wrong but i find your poem to be a mystery. from beginning to ending you strictly show what true love is. your poem was romantically written. thanks for the read. "your so vein" means mood or humor.
your so vein
godlucifer
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2019
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you define love strictly romantically. correct me if i'm wrong but i find your poem to be a mystery. from beginning to ending you strictly show what true love is. your poem was romantically written. thanks for the read. "your so vein" means mood or humor.
your so vein
godlucifer
Comment Written 09-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2019
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Thank you for stopping and checking it out! thank you for stopping and checking it out my muse is love and that?s pretty much what I really like writing about! Appreciate you leaving your feedback for me today! xo
Comment from kiwigirl2821
Hi Diana
You know what I think? I think love is worth every single moment of pain or bliss that life gives us. I've had the opportunity to know it two serious times and I wouldn't trade a moment of either. Beautiful and inspiring write.
xoxo deborah
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2019
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Hi Diana
You know what I think? I think love is worth every single moment of pain or bliss that life gives us. I've had the opportunity to know it two serious times and I wouldn't trade a moment of either. Beautiful and inspiring write.
xoxo deborah
Comment Written 09-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2019
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You are so very right! I?ve experienced a couple of those kind of relationships in my life and no matter what I would never change having had the experience because it?s all about how it made me feel inside! Thank you for your awesome review today! xoxo
Comment from Mastery
Sweet rhyming poetry, Diana. You cut to the heart of true love. I especially liked this stanza:
"I know he's the one
that forever will be
the keeper of
my love's light."
Good job and good luck in the contest. I think you have a winner here. : ) Bob
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2019
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Sweet rhyming poetry, Diana. You cut to the heart of true love. I especially liked this stanza:
"I know he's the one
that forever will be
the keeper of
my love's light."
Good job and good luck in the contest. I think you have a winner here. : ) Bob
Comment Written 09-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2019
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Thank you so much! I really enjoy tapping deep down As my muse is love and I think I do my best work with that muse! Appreciate very much that you enjoyed it! xoxo
