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Comment from Pearl Edwards
An amusing interpretation of this 'cute frogs' picture Trisha. Obviously this trio didn't space themselves out with a water between drinks. Leaves me smiling.
cheers,
valda
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2019
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An amusing interpretation of this 'cute frogs' picture Trisha. Obviously this trio didn't space themselves out with a water between drinks. Leaves me smiling.
cheers,
valda
Comment Written 06-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2019
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Hi, Valda. As long as I leave a smile for my revIewers, I?m happy. Thanks for reviewing kindly
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from BeasPeas
LOL! They do look like they're hanging on to each other for dear life. Never thought it was because of a hangover. A unique way to express their plight. Fun and a good little read. Marilyn
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2019
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LOL! They do look like they're hanging on to each other for dear life. Never thought it was because of a hangover. A unique way to express their plight. Fun and a good little read. Marilyn
Comment Written 03-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2019
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I think it?s fun to ?think outside the box?. Thank you for your kind review.
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from James W. Reynolds
This is a fun poem. I like the light-hearted theme, which is served well by the rhymes and the rhythm. How many stories begin with "I knew I should not have been drinking all night."
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2019
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This is a fun poem. I like the light-hearted theme, which is served well by the rhymes and the rhythm. How many stories begin with "I knew I should not have been drinking all night."
Comment Written 02-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2019
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A lot! Thank you for a great review, James
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem about the photo of the pix-this challenge and an excellent interpretation of the pix this challenge and the three frogs haning on to the branch afraid to fall to their death in the street.
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2019
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A very well-written poem about the photo of the pix-this challenge and an excellent interpretation of the pix this challenge and the three frogs haning on to the branch afraid to fall to their death in the street.
Comment Written 01-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2019
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Thank you for a great review, Sandra
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from pome lover
cute poem and interpretation.
It does look like they've been on a bender. The one on the left, especially, looks bleary-eyed. The one on top looks like he's singing a drunken "Help," by the Beatles.
You described their situation very well. A fun read.
pome lover
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2019
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cute poem and interpretation.
It does look like they've been on a bender. The one on the left, especially, looks bleary-eyed. The one on top looks like he's singing a drunken "Help," by the Beatles.
You described their situation very well. A fun read.
pome lover
Comment Written 01-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2019
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I?m so glad you enjoyed my version. Thank you for a great review
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from damommy
Hahahaha. This is a great interpretation of this picture. It gave me such a laugh. That's exactly what they look like they're doing, hanging on for dear life. I really enjoyed this.
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2019
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Hahahaha. This is a great interpretation of this picture. It gave me such a laugh. That's exactly what they look like they're doing, hanging on for dear life. I really enjoyed this.
Comment Written 01-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2019
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Great! I?m glad you got a laugh from my version. Thank you for a great review.
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Gail Denham
Funny for sure - the image of the frogs and them leaning, swaying, about to tumble to the ground. As if they'd stayed too long at the pub. Very cute and well done.
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2019
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Funny for sure - the image of the frogs and them leaning, swaying, about to tumble to the ground. As if they'd stayed too long at the pub. Very cute and well done.
Comment Written 01-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2019
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Thank you for a great review, Gail
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Earl Corp
Did you notice the frog to the extreme right appears to be mounting the middle frog? Maybe thats why his eyes are bulging. Your poem rhymed, makes sense, and entertains.
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2019
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Did you notice the frog to the extreme right appears to be mounting the middle frog? Maybe thats why his eyes are bulging. Your poem rhymed, makes sense, and entertains.
Comment Written 01-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2019
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Earl, thank you for your amusing, yet positive, review
Trisha
Comment from Michele Harber
This is a very cute poem that rhymes nicely and perfectly fits the picture. I particularly love the first stanza about the world spinning, something to which anyone who's had too much to drink can relate. Just one quick proofing comment: when you say "the boughs tipping," add an apostrophe before the "s" for "bough is."
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2019
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This is a very cute poem that rhymes nicely and perfectly fits the picture. I particularly love the first stanza about the world spinning, something to which anyone who's had too much to drink can relate. Just one quick proofing comment: when you say "the boughs tipping," add an apostrophe before the "s" for "bough is."
Comment Written 01-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2019
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Thank you for a great review and bonus eagle eyed ?catch?
Hugs, Trisha
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You're very welcome, Trisha.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
He he he, I'm loving your interpretation of this picture here Trisha, three drunken happy frogs smiling and inebriated, a fun write, much enjoyed, best wishes, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2019
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He he he, I'm loving your interpretation of this picture here Trisha, three drunken happy frogs smiling and inebriated, a fun write, much enjoyed, best wishes, love Dolly x
Comment Written 31-May-2019
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2019
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Well, damummy does say to think outside the box! Thank you for a great review.
Hugs, Trisha
