Love of Animals
Viewing comments for Chapter 18 "Bug Fest"Eclectic mix
8 total reviews
Comment from Pearl Edwards
An amusing read Trisha in your very bug infested summer picnic Cascade. Your repeating lines all work well and smoothly. Nice write,
cheers,
valda
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2019
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An amusing read Trisha in your very bug infested summer picnic Cascade. Your repeating lines all work well and smoothly. Nice write,
cheers,
valda
Comment Written 02-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2019
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Thank you for a positive review. Just memories LOL
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written cascade poem about the summer picnic that is enjoyed by everyone from the invited guests to the ones who feast on the guests as much as on the food.
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2019
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A very well-written cascade poem about the summer picnic that is enjoyed by everyone from the invited guests to the ones who feast on the guests as much as on the food.
Comment Written 01-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2019
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Positive review thanks for reading the poem.
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
He he he and they all enjoy the feast together! This is picnics outdoors for you! The flies are the worst, they never give up! I liked your poem Trisha, you made me smile once again, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2019
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He he he and they all enjoy the feast together! This is picnics outdoors for you! The flies are the worst, they never give up! I liked your poem Trisha, you made me smile once again, love Dolly x
Comment Written 31-May-2019
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2019
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I aim to keep you smiling! Thank you for a great review Dolly .
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
The ants picnic and what a feast they will have. I have never seen a cascade poem and you followed the rules to the end. Very nicely done and the content is keep intact throughout the whole piece
reply by the author on 31-May-2019
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The ants picnic and what a feast they will have. I have never seen a cascade poem and you followed the rules to the end. Very nicely done and the content is keep intact throughout the whole piece
Comment Written 31-May-2019
reply by the author on 31-May-2019
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Thank you for a super review!
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You did a good job with the Potlatch challenge, Bucketlist. I enjoyed reading your poem. Your words are descriptive and flow smoothly with the repeating lines fitting in nicely. The picture is a nice addition, too. Thanks for sharing. Jan
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2019
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You did a good job with the Potlatch challenge, Bucketlist. I enjoyed reading your poem. Your words are descriptive and flow smoothly with the repeating lines fitting in nicely. The picture is a nice addition, too. Thanks for sharing. Jan
Comment Written 31-May-2019
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2019
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I?m always feel honored that you like my poetry. Thank you for a great review, Jan
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Bugs are free for all, in family, in picnic, free with food, everywhere and the mosquitoes, bees, flies, all free with food; you remind us to live free of all bugs; well said, well done. Write to inspire, change -- DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2019
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Bugs are free for all, in family, in picnic, free with food, everywhere and the mosquitoes, bees, flies, all free with food; you remind us to live free of all bugs; well said, well done. Write to inspire, change -- DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 31-May-2019
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2019
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Al, always good to get your reviews, glad you liked the poem
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Noooooo.. if there's one thing about picnics that really make them a 'downer', it's the BUGS!! :) ;) This is a fun cascade, though, Trisha and puts a smile on your face even if it is about bugs! ;) :) Thanx for sharing! ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 31-May-2019
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Noooooo.. if there's one thing about picnics that really make them a 'downer', it's the BUGS!! :) ;) This is a fun cascade, though, Trisha and puts a smile on your face even if it is about bugs! ;) :) Thanx for sharing! ;) Yvette
Comment Written 31-May-2019
reply by the author on 31-May-2019
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Bug fests are a part of this shared planet! I appreciate you taking the time to review this cascade
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from damommy
As promised, I've raised the rating. It's well deserved. You did a find job with this poetry form. Thank you for being gracious about a critique.
Yvonne
reply by the author on 31-May-2019
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As promised, I've raised the rating. It's well deserved. You did a find job with this poetry form. Thank you for being gracious about a critique.
Yvonne
Comment Written 31-May-2019
reply by the author on 31-May-2019
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Okay I think it?s fixed now. Thanks for your understanding review!
Hugs, Trisha