Bright Eyes
His bright eyes penetrated her very being.2 total reviews
Comment from kiwigirl2821
Hi Moonsunrise
I enjoyed this because I don't often see this type of write in the 5-7-5 contests. Great words used and a good telling of a story. Good luck. xoxo Kiwi
reply by the author on 31-May-2019
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Hi Moonsunrise
I enjoyed this because I don't often see this type of write in the 5-7-5 contests. Great words used and a good telling of a story. Good luck. xoxo Kiwi
Comment Written 30-May-2019
reply by the author on 31-May-2019
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Thank you so much for kind review.
Kind regards.
Comment from Bill Schott
This 5-7-5, Bright Eyes, has the right set up and says a lot about the gaze of the right guy, on the right night, and in the right place. Of course, if he's a soul stealer, that's a different deal altogether.
reply by the author on 31-May-2019
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This 5-7-5, Bright Eyes, has the right set up and says a lot about the gaze of the right guy, on the right night, and in the right place. Of course, if he's a soul stealer, that's a different deal altogether.
Comment Written 30-May-2019
reply by the author on 31-May-2019
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Thank you so much for your kind review
I very much appreciate it.
