Reviews from

A Light in the Darkness

Viewing comments for Chapter 6 "Case Closed"
Young rookie detective is assigned a serial case

11 total reviews 
Comment from Lance S. Loria
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

Lots of suspense and mystery in this story. Edit:Teared up a few time(s)? I'm looking forward to the next chapter. No other edits or adjustments necessary.

This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.

 Comment Written 30-May-2019


reply by the author on 30-May-2019
    Thank you so much, fixed my error. Thanks for the help. Rox