Happy Days
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Comment from Earl Corp
I understood the first piece of your poem. I'm not a free verse fan, For some reason I'm having a hard time assimilating "happy days" with the rest of the poem. It's not a combination I can buy into.
reply by the author on 29-May-2019
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I understood the first piece of your poem. I'm not a free verse fan, For some reason I'm having a hard time assimilating "happy days" with the rest of the poem. It's not a combination I can buy into.
Comment Written 29-May-2019
reply by the author on 29-May-2019
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Happy days is sarcasm
Comment from rspoet
Hello Jean,
You've written an excellent poem of the nature of happiness.
Would it be happy days if one or both had to change to be together?
Maybe yes, maybe no. Sometimes opposites attract.
Much depends on the individuals, free as a bird or tied to one another.
Well done
Robert
reply by the author on 29-May-2019
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Hello Jean,
You've written an excellent poem of the nature of happiness.
Would it be happy days if one or both had to change to be together?
Maybe yes, maybe no. Sometimes opposites attract.
Much depends on the individuals, free as a bird or tied to one another.
Well done
Robert
Comment Written 29-May-2019
reply by the author on 29-May-2019
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Thank you
Comment from Bill Pinder
Thanks for sharing this poem about the possibility of happier days. Sounds like the main character definitely has some good memories, but wishes for even better ones. Have a great day! Bill
reply by the author on 29-May-2019
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Thanks for sharing this poem about the possibility of happier days. Sounds like the main character definitely has some good memories, but wishes for even better ones. Have a great day! Bill
Comment Written 29-May-2019
reply by the author on 29-May-2019
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Thank you
