Flying Horses
A Swap Quatrain for the Carousel Contest9 total reviews
Comment from Darlene Franklin
You handle the format brilliantly. I'm just not a huge fan of the swap, lol. But beautiful word pictures, perfect choice of words, great use of rhyme. Well done.
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2019
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You handle the format brilliantly. I'm just not a huge fan of the swap, lol. But beautiful word pictures, perfect choice of words, great use of rhyme. Well done.
Comment Written 18-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2019
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Thank you for taking the time to read and review.
Comment from moongirlwriter
very cute carousel poem and oh so accurate. Love the music and the chance to catch the brass ring. You've followed the prompt rules, the best of luck to you in the contest.
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2019
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very cute carousel poem and oh so accurate. Love the music and the chance to catch the brass ring. You've followed the prompt rules, the best of luck to you in the contest.
Comment Written 17-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2019
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So glad you enjoyed this fun piece!
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Comment from Debra White
Hello :)
I really like your poem. It is beautifully written.
The format really suits the theme and the meter is so even, I can visualise the horses going round on the carousel in time to your words.
Good luck in the voting booth.
Best wishes, Debra :)
reply by the author on 28-May-2019
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Hello :)
I really like your poem. It is beautifully written.
The format really suits the theme and the meter is so even, I can visualise the horses going round on the carousel in time to your words.
Good luck in the voting booth.
Best wishes, Debra :)
Comment Written 28-May-2019
reply by the author on 28-May-2019
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So glad you enjoyed this fun piece on flying horses!
Comment from way2gokevs
A lovely sweet horsy poem.............well written with all the rhyming in the right places...........Thanks very much for sharing and the best of luck.
Have a great day. Cheers, Kev.
reply by the author on 28-May-2019
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A lovely sweet horsy poem.............well written with all the rhyming in the right places...........Thanks very much for sharing and the best of luck.
Have a great day. Cheers, Kev.
Comment Written 28-May-2019
reply by the author on 28-May-2019
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So glad you enjoyed this fun piece on flying horses!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A wonderful write, perfect meter, rhymes and the sentiments are filled with excitement and fun of the carousel, your poem is a winner for me and you stole one of my sixes here, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 28-May-2019
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A wonderful write, perfect meter, rhymes and the sentiments are filled with excitement and fun of the carousel, your poem is a winner for me and you stole one of my sixes here, love Dolly x
Comment Written 27-May-2019
reply by the author on 28-May-2019
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So glad you enjoyed this fun piece on flying horses! And I really appreciated the generous rating. Thank you!
Comment from sharonlshelley
a lovely fantasy poem about flying horses and there venture. the picture really works with the poem. thanks for sharing and good luck for the competition
reply by the author on 27-May-2019
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a lovely fantasy poem about flying horses and there venture. the picture really works with the poem. thanks for sharing and good luck for the competition
Comment Written 27-May-2019
reply by the author on 27-May-2019
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Thank you for the encouraging feedback!
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This tells how interestingly, amusingly and entertainingly you passed your summer days flying with your girlfriend by red horses above rainbows in the sky as long as music plays you fly; well said, well done. Write to inspire, change -- DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 27-May-2019
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This tells how interestingly, amusingly and entertainingly you passed your summer days flying with your girlfriend by red horses above rainbows in the sky as long as music plays you fly; well said, well done. Write to inspire, change -- DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 27-May-2019
reply by the author on 27-May-2019
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Thank you!
Comment from Mrs. KT
Hello Mystery Poet!
What a delightful write. How I loved the carousel as a child. Your images that you create for the reader are "spot on!" Rhythmic and well-paced.
Best wishes!
diane
reply by the author on 27-May-2019
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Hello Mystery Poet!
What a delightful write. How I loved the carousel as a child. Your images that you create for the reader are "spot on!" Rhythmic and well-paced.
Best wishes!
diane
Comment Written 27-May-2019
reply by the author on 27-May-2019
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So glad you enjoyed this piece!
Comment from RodG
This is a delightful entry in the Carousel contest and will appeal to young readers and those young at heart because of the swap format. It also appeals to our sense of fantasy as we ride and fly along with the Speaker on her pretty pink horse. Fun to read aloud. Rod
reply by the author on 27-May-2019
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This is a delightful entry in the Carousel contest and will appeal to young readers and those young at heart because of the swap format. It also appeals to our sense of fantasy as we ride and fly along with the Speaker on her pretty pink horse. Fun to read aloud. Rod
Comment Written 27-May-2019
reply by the author on 27-May-2019
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Thank you for sharing your insights!
