LaFerrari
A worldwide icon made in Italy3 total reviews
Comment from C. Gale Burnett
This is truly, truly brilliant. I love all the very descriptive words you used to describe man's love for the LaFerrari and everything that is enticing about this wonderful machine. Without the artwork and the title, one may believe you are talking about a woman. That's good poetry.
Last line ... I believe you may want to change 'materpiece' to 'masterpiece'. This should not trip you up in the contest, for this is a truly exceptional entry, but you put so much effort into this wonderful Acrostic that I thought you'd want to know.
Very best wishes to you!!
reply by the author on 27-May-2019
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This is truly, truly brilliant. I love all the very descriptive words you used to describe man's love for the LaFerrari and everything that is enticing about this wonderful machine. Without the artwork and the title, one may believe you are talking about a woman. That's good poetry.
Last line ... I believe you may want to change 'materpiece' to 'masterpiece'. This should not trip you up in the contest, for this is a truly exceptional entry, but you put so much effort into this wonderful Acrostic that I thought you'd want to know.
Very best wishes to you!!
Comment Written 27-May-2019
reply by the author on 27-May-2019
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That is exactly how I wanted it to appear ..that I was talking about a woman because that's how they look/ treat laFerrari ..they are in love with this beautiful creature .
I'm glad you noticed. Thank you for the lovely review ..I started last year to write in rhyme for fun but it has got under my skin ..
Thanks I will correct the typo( smile)
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This acrostic poem on the title - LAFERRARI tells about the worldwide icon, an Italian masterpiece, a country's pride; well said, well done. Write to inspire, change -- DR ALCREATOR
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This acrostic poem on the title - LAFERRARI tells about the worldwide icon, an Italian masterpiece, a country's pride; well said, well done. Write to inspire, change -- DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 27-May-2019
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
When I was in Monaco once on holiday I saw so many Ferrari's. They are so beautiful, stylish and just amazing to look at. I enjoyed your descriptive poem, cars made for dreamers and millionaires, your tributary poem is much enjoyed, a fine acrostic deserving of a six, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 27-May-2019
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When I was in Monaco once on holiday I saw so many Ferrari's. They are so beautiful, stylish and just amazing to look at. I enjoyed your descriptive poem, cars made for dreamers and millionaires, your tributary poem is much enjoyed, a fine acrostic deserving of a six, love Dolly x
Comment Written 27-May-2019
reply by the author on 27-May-2019
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My papa and I went through a couple of times on our way home from Spain..( usually we took the ferry from Barcellona to Genova 18 hours .. car parked in the cargo bay below ).
It's the city of the rich..the mega yachts are eye catching too.
Behind Stresa there is a mount called Mottarone and every Summer now and then you can hear the engines of 6/7 Ferrari passing that are being tested on the winding roads.
Glad you liked the poem and thank you for being so generous with your vote . I appreciate your enthusiasm!
