My Love For You
A Declaration of Love15 total reviews
Comment from Willie P. Smith
I generally prefer rhyming poetry, but sometimes a writing catches my eye
and I have to read it. This is the case here. Although there is no rhyme,
you have written a very soft and touching post. Very good,
reply by the author on 31-May-2019
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I generally prefer rhyming poetry, but sometimes a writing catches my eye
and I have to read it. This is the case here. Although there is no rhyme,
you have written a very soft and touching post. Very good,
Comment Written 31-May-2019
reply by the author on 31-May-2019
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Thank You!
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
I like the message of this and the thoughts, feelings, and emotions infused in your words that can be felt. I love the declaration made to do everything every day to let them know how much you care. I enjoyed this romantic, passionate, and well written work. Well done!
reply by the author on 30-May-2019
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I like the message of this and the thoughts, feelings, and emotions infused in your words that can be felt. I love the declaration made to do everything every day to let them know how much you care. I enjoyed this romantic, passionate, and well written work. Well done!
Comment Written 30-May-2019
reply by the author on 30-May-2019
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Thank You so much for your encouraging words.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Your declaration of love is enormous, inexpressible in words for you cannot describe it using all words from English language, so you simply say in three words; well said, well done. Write to inspire, change -- DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 30-May-2019
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Your declaration of love is enormous, inexpressible in words for you cannot describe it using all words from English language, so you simply say in three words; well said, well done. Write to inspire, change -- DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 30-May-2019
reply by the author on 30-May-2019
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Thank You! I am humbled by your words.
Comment from Carla Trinklein
This is lovely! Whoever you wrote it for is very blessed indeed. I hope you share it with them! The only change I would make is when you speak of the "length or depth or breath" of your love. I think you meant "breadth"- just a typo. Also, consider adding pictures with your poems. Most people seem to use them on Fanstory, and your work would get noticed more. Welcome to the site, glad to have you aboard!
reply by the author on 30-May-2019
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This is lovely! Whoever you wrote it for is very blessed indeed. I hope you share it with them! The only change I would make is when you speak of the "length or depth or breath" of your love. I think you meant "breadth"- just a typo. Also, consider adding pictures with your poems. Most people seem to use them on Fanstory, and your work would get noticed more. Welcome to the site, glad to have you aboard!
Comment Written 29-May-2019
reply by the author on 30-May-2019
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Thank You!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
To love this much and to feel it everyday is magical and endearing and your words certainly confirmed your love here, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
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reply by the author on 28-May-2019
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To love this much and to feel it everyday is magical and endearing and your words certainly confirmed your love here, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
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Comment Written 27-May-2019
reply by the author on 28-May-2019
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Thank You Dolly for your words of encouragement!
