My Love For You
A Declaration of Love15 total reviews
Comment from Joan E.
Welcome to FanStory--I hope the site is fulfilling your goals for membership.
I enjoyed your free verse, love poem and your use of hyperbole. Best wishes with the big "task" and in the contest. Cheers- Joan
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2019
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Welcome to FanStory--I hope the site is fulfilling your goals for membership.
I enjoyed your free verse, love poem and your use of hyperbole. Best wishes with the big "task" and in the contest. Cheers- Joan
Comment Written 15-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2019
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Thank You Joan!
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written free verse poem about a heartfelt love declaration about the great love you have in your heart for the one you love and you are determined to show him how much and how deep your love is.
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2019
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A very well-written free verse poem about a heartfelt love declaration about the great love you have in your heart for the one you love and you are determined to show him how much and how deep your love is.
Comment Written 15-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2019
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Thank You!
Comment from Gail Denham
That's a boat load of love, I'd say. All the letters and words in the English language. A lucky person to have that much love shown to him or her. Nice job.
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2019
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That's a boat load of love, I'd say. All the letters and words in the English language. A lucky person to have that much love shown to him or her. Nice job.
Comment Written 14-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2019
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Thank You! I think I'm the lucky one though!
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
And what a daunting task. Saying the right words is your talent for the poem is beautiful. Now your actions will show the meat of your statements and forever have you carefully (hopefully) planning your every move. Good luck.
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2019
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And what a daunting task. Saying the right words is your talent for the poem is beautiful. Now your actions will show the meat of your statements and forever have you carefully (hopefully) planning your every move. Good luck.
Comment Written 14-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2019
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Thank You!
Comment from Ava Wilson
You did such a beautiful job with your declaration of love in this piece of poetry. I can feel how strong your love is with your great word usage. Great job! I look forward to reading more of your work!
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2019
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You did such a beautiful job with your declaration of love in this piece of poetry. I can feel how strong your love is with your great word usage. Great job! I look forward to reading more of your work!
Comment Written 14-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2019
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Thank You!
Comment from victor 66
I have the same feelings about any love poems in that they both interest me and intrigue me. And your words are absolutely correct, how would you possibly put into words what you need to show with action. Best wishes.
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2019
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I have the same feelings about any love poems in that they both interest me and intrigue me. And your words are absolutely correct, how would you possibly put into words what you need to show with action. Best wishes.
Comment Written 14-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2019
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Thank You!
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You're welcome.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
A beautiful offering for this contest... one that takes the daily task of showing our love as much more important than the writing of it... :) Thanx for sharing and best of luck in the contest! ;)
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2019
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A beautiful offering for this contest... one that takes the daily task of showing our love as much more important than the writing of it... :) Thanx for sharing and best of luck in the contest! ;)
Comment Written 14-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2019
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Thank You!
Comment from Sandra Ludwick
I really enjoyed reading your poem. But perhaps you could specify verbiage for the word "it." The placement seems unreferenced. Thank you for sharing your thoughts.
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reply by the author on 02-Jun-2019
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I really enjoyed reading your poem. But perhaps you could specify verbiage for the word "it." The placement seems unreferenced. Thank you for sharing your thoughts.
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Comment Written 01-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2019
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Thank You.
Comment from juliaSjames
Dear Poet
You have penned a heartfelt, hyperbolic confession of romantic love. The poem is a waterfall of emotion. But at the end you acknowledge that love is not only reflected in words but also in love-inspired action.
I have a small suggestion. You might wish to consider structuring your poem in stanza form so as to enhance its appeal.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2019
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Dear Poet
You have penned a heartfelt, hyperbolic confession of romantic love. The poem is a waterfall of emotion. But at the end you acknowledge that love is not only reflected in words but also in love-inspired action.
I have a small suggestion. You might wish to consider structuring your poem in stanza form so as to enhance its appeal.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 01-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2019
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Thank You
Comment from Diana L Crawford
Love this! What i love most is the amount of words in the English language that you used to express there were not enough to fully express your love, and yet you ended with the three words that truly express your idea-I love youğ?¥°
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2019
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Love this! What i love most is the amount of words in the English language that you used to express there were not enough to fully express your love, and yet you ended with the three words that truly express your idea-I love youğ?¥°
Comment Written 01-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2019
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Thank You
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Very welcome!🌹
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And thank you for the review nomination! Wow! What a surprise🥰😍
