The Poet Tree
how nature can deliver poetry23 total reviews
Comment from Liz O'Neill
This is lovely. I love your metaphors. It reminds me of my book Be Wee With Bea in which Bea the wee bear listens to the stories told by the stones tumbling in the currents of the river. She listens to the leaves and the winds. I like how you call this poetry. This will draw the readers in who are poets, to enjoy the invitation to write with such love for nature. Your imagery is vivid. Well written.
reply by the author on 31-May-2019
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This is lovely. I love your metaphors. It reminds me of my book Be Wee With Bea in which Bea the wee bear listens to the stories told by the stones tumbling in the currents of the river. She listens to the leaves and the winds. I like how you call this poetry. This will draw the readers in who are poets, to enjoy the invitation to write with such love for nature. Your imagery is vivid. Well written.
Comment Written 30-May-2019
reply by the author on 31-May-2019
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Thank you Liz for your very kind review and stars, so very sincerely appreciated: HIS GRAYNESS; Vance
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
As poet tree planned, so Nature helps making poetry, but the tree though blessed might have expected and hoped and insisting much on Nature; we hope; well said, well done. Write to inspire, change -- DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 31-May-2019
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As poet tree planned, so Nature helps making poetry, but the tree though blessed might have expected and hoped and insisting much on Nature; we hope; well said, well done. Write to inspire, change -- DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 30-May-2019
reply by the author on 31-May-2019
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Thanks DR ALCREATOR for your great review and stars, so very much appreciated! HIS GRAYNESS; Vance
Comment from Badger_29
I found this to be delightful outstanding and amazing. A fresh new scheme a wave rhyming and Tiny things together with the poetry any deep metaphor that represents all of us poisoned writers utilizing what Nature has provided and God in our environment to inspire us therefore making it clear that the inspiration is always there and always available all we need to do is tap into it. I found a Melancholy and sad undertone to this is the poetry also represents the part inside of us that is yearning for nourishment.
Dear Grayness, I can tell you how much I enjoy your writing and what a pleasure and an honor it is to write with you here.
Happy Memorial Day!
Blessings,
Brother Badger cull
Darren
reply by the author on 31-May-2019
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I found this to be delightful outstanding and amazing. A fresh new scheme a wave rhyming and Tiny things together with the poetry any deep metaphor that represents all of us poisoned writers utilizing what Nature has provided and God in our environment to inspire us therefore making it clear that the inspiration is always there and always available all we need to do is tap into it. I found a Melancholy and sad undertone to this is the poetry also represents the part inside of us that is yearning for nourishment.
Dear Grayness, I can tell you how much I enjoy your writing and what a pleasure and an honor it is to write with you here.
Happy Memorial Day!
Blessings,
Brother Badger cull
Darren
Comment Written 27-May-2019
reply by the author on 31-May-2019
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Thank you so much Brother Badger cull, your wonderful review has made my day and I greatly appreciate your very kind words and lovely perspectives on my work! please stay close! HIS GRAYNESS; Vance
Comment from judiverse
This is delightful, and I enjoyed the picture of the birds. What an excellent thought to convey--that we can find poetry in the trees and other great works of nature. The birds and bees join in to help deliver beautiful poetry of nature. The park makes an excellent setting. Great work with the rhyme in this. Have a great day. judi
reply by the author on 31-May-2019
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This is delightful, and I enjoyed the picture of the birds. What an excellent thought to convey--that we can find poetry in the trees and other great works of nature. The birds and bees join in to help deliver beautiful poetry of nature. The park makes an excellent setting. Great work with the rhyme in this. Have a great day. judi
Comment Written 27-May-2019
reply by the author on 31-May-2019
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Thank you sincerely judi, for your wonderful review and stars, so very much appreciated! HIS GRAYNESS; Vance
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You're welcome. It was beautifully expressed. judi
Comment from DeborahWrite
Dear His Grayness,
Your poem and selected artwork align perfectly. I loved your idea of "The Poet Tree" and its community atmosphere is so clever! Great piece and thank you for its joyful sense.
My best,
Deborah
reply by the author on 31-May-2019
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Dear His Grayness,
Your poem and selected artwork align perfectly. I loved your idea of "The Poet Tree" and its community atmosphere is so clever! Great piece and thank you for its joyful sense.
My best,
Deborah
Comment Written 26-May-2019
reply by the author on 31-May-2019
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Thank you Deborah, for your lovely review and stars so very much appreciated! I hope to hear from you often! HIS GRAYNESS: Vance
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Thank you, Vance :) Deborah
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Thank you Deborah for your lovely message making my day! HIS GRAYNESS; Vance
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Thanks for you message and making me smile! love Vance
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Bless you Deborah for your lovely message! Vance
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Bless you always dear one! Vance
Comment from lyenochka
Thanks for this lovely poem about the tree near you. All the life that is teeming in the tree inspires poetree. And you have penned it so well that we'll also admire the poet trees around us here.
reply by the author on 31-May-2019
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Thanks for this lovely poem about the tree near you. All the life that is teeming in the tree inspires poetree. And you have penned it so well that we'll also admire the poet trees around us here.
Comment Written 26-May-2019
reply by the author on 31-May-2019
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Thanks so much lyenochka, for your great review and stars, so very much appreciated! HIS GRAYNESS; Vance
Comment from country ranch writer
Singing ing songs of a good life are brought forth by the poet tree singing praises for one and all to hear. Great job and presentation for all to enjoy.
reply by the author on 31-May-2019
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Singing ing songs of a good life are brought forth by the poet tree singing praises for one and all to hear. Great job and presentation for all to enjoy.
Comment Written 26-May-2019
reply by the author on 31-May-2019
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Thanks you so much country ranch writer, for your lovely review and generous stars, so very sincerely appreciated ! Please stay close HIS GRAYNESS; Vance
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Will be around
Comment from Beri Bee
This is so delightful! I can hear the music/poetry! This is a very endearing piece of poetry. It seems so symbiotic that poetry should glorify nature be its own poet!
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2019
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This is so delightful! I can hear the music/poetry! This is a very endearing piece of poetry. It seems so symbiotic that poetry should glorify nature be its own poet!
Comment Written 26-May-2019
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2019
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Thank you so much Beri Bee for your lovely review and stars which are sincerely appreciated! HIS GRAYNESS; Vance
Comment from BeasPeas
Hi Vance. A lovely image to illustrate your nice poem. There is one thing to change here:
"She gathers her beloved birds and bees as the crickets
And flies bow down on their knees"
Since all lines rhyme aa, bb, cc, etc.:
"She gathers her beloved birds and bees
as the crickets and flies bow down on their knees"
Marilyn
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2019
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Hi Vance. A lovely image to illustrate your nice poem. There is one thing to change here:
"She gathers her beloved birds and bees as the crickets
And flies bow down on their knees"
Since all lines rhyme aa, bb, cc, etc.:
"She gathers her beloved birds and bees
as the crickets and flies bow down on their knees"
Marilyn
Comment Written 26-May-2019
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2019
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Thanks so much Marilyn for your lovely review and good tip so very much appreciated! Always a joy to hear from you! Vance
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a wonderful concept, a poet tree where birds sing and their voices are heard! What a joyful poem, you brought sunshine to me with these words, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2019
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This is a wonderful concept, a poet tree where birds sing and their voices are heard! What a joyful poem, you brought sunshine to me with these words, love Dolly x
Comment Written 26-May-2019
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2019
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Wow! Dolly, wonderful to know that I brought some sunshine to you and only wish I was there to endorse it with a big HUG! love Vance
