Comment from LisaMay

Excellent

I am new to your work, I like your poem very much, with its playful tone. I guess other people will be familiar with other chapters, but I am perplexed by the information in your author's notes: they are so disconnected about different things... apart from the heart connection.

 Comment Written 25-May-2019

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reply by the author on 25-May-2019

That's my Son Jason whims Heart and Kidneys exist in others.
Thanks and Call that number if interested.
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reply by LisaMay on 25-May-2019

Thanks for telling me that vey sad and personally painful but uplifting news. I live in NZ so that phone number is not relevant. I am a registered donor; if I die in a car accident it is written on my licence. My brother's life was extended by an organ transplant - kidney. I offer my condolences for losing your son.

reply by the author on 25-May-2019

Thanks Lisa.
As a Living Donor I await to donate a kidney.
To make Jason proud.
There's much more to this to come.
Ricky.
I will check your work now.

Comment from Y. M. Roger

Excellent

What a fun little 'lover's play' with references to both Dora and a clown... it's really quite beautiful, Doc, how you've got Dora tracing a clown's heart with her crayon.... such a wonderful 'new love out of a broken heart' offering! ;) Thanx for sharing! :)

 Comment Written 25-May-2019

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reply by the author on 25-May-2019

Has a grandfather for the first four years I raised my grandson with my daughter from dinosaur train to Dora the Explorer I got to learn about all of the pertinent cartoons for the new generation thanks for your wonderful review glad you enjoyed my little dance with the Clown
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