The Plain Chachalaca
an obnoxious bird6 total reviews
Comment from Janilou
I haven't heard of these birds before, but you're right. They sure do sound just like some of our politicians. Wow. LOL It's a great poem. Loved it.
You sure did make me smile.
Jan
reply by the author on 26-May-2019
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I haven't heard of these birds before, but you're right. They sure do sound just like some of our politicians. Wow. LOL It's a great poem. Loved it.
You sure did make me smile.
Jan
Comment Written 25-May-2019
reply by the author on 26-May-2019
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thank you so much! So glad I did.
Comment from Rmocruz
Remember Sly and the Family Stone?
All that's missing is the boom! In front of Cha-cha-laca.
I see a solidly rhymed contest entry.
Best wishes with this humorous poem.
reply by the author on 24-May-2019
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Remember Sly and the Family Stone?
All that's missing is the boom! In front of Cha-cha-laca.
I see a solidly rhymed contest entry.
Best wishes with this humorous poem.
Comment Written 24-May-2019
reply by the author on 24-May-2019
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yep. I remember.
thanks so much! I appreciate your good wishes.
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You're welcome.
Comment from Debra White
Hello :) I enjoyed your poem.
I never heard of this bird before, so found it interesting to learn about the noise they make and their eating habits!
Just out of interest, what does "sup" refer to?
Good luck in the voting booth.
Best wishes, Debra :)
reply by the author on 24-May-2019
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Hello :) I enjoyed your poem.
I never heard of this bird before, so found it interesting to learn about the noise they make and their eating habits!
Just out of interest, what does "sup" refer to?
Good luck in the voting booth.
Best wishes, Debra :)
Comment Written 24-May-2019
reply by the author on 24-May-2019
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supper.
sorry, needed to abbreviate.
thanks for the good wishes!
Comment from rspoet
You've written an excellent poem and entry for the contest
with very good rhymes in the couplets.
The cha-cha-laca is much like the political yada-yada-yada
both need a mute button to shut them up.
Well done
Good luck in the contest
Robert
reply by the author on 24-May-2019
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You've written an excellent poem and entry for the contest
with very good rhymes in the couplets.
The cha-cha-laca is much like the political yada-yada-yada
both need a mute button to shut them up.
Well done
Good luck in the contest
Robert
Comment Written 24-May-2019
reply by the author on 24-May-2019
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hey - good analogy!
thanks a lot!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I have never heard of this bird before so you have certainly brought something new to my eyes and ears here. I shall have to listen to the bird on YouTube now! Your poem is fun and I enjoyed your words, Love Dolly x
reply by the author on 24-May-2019
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I have never heard of this bird before so you have certainly brought something new to my eyes and ears here. I shall have to listen to the bird on YouTube now! Your poem is fun and I enjoyed your words, Love Dolly x
Comment Written 24-May-2019
reply by the author on 24-May-2019
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thanks. I've actually never seen one, but have heard of them and what a nuisance they are.
Comment from Cybertron1986
The humorous and educational message was highly appealing. It's rare to run into a piece that exhibits a thoughtful and engaging use facts that allow the reader to learn a new fact. Very creative in expression and well accepted for all ages. Well done
reply by the author on 24-May-2019
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The humorous and educational message was highly appealing. It's rare to run into a piece that exhibits a thoughtful and engaging use facts that allow the reader to learn a new fact. Very creative in expression and well accepted for all ages. Well done
Comment Written 23-May-2019
reply by the author on 24-May-2019
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wow - I appreciate that very much. I'm writing a collection of poems about Bodacious Birds. Many thanks.
