Selfless Love
My parents gift18 total reviews
Comment from June Sargent
This is a lovely tribute to your parents and the way they brought you up. In being selfless in their love, they set a fine example for you to emulate. It is a rare thing today to see someone truly give of themselves without expecting anything in return. Treasure their gift.
I'm walking now toward their gift
a love for life and strength to know
to pause my own if someone finds
they need my glove of selfless love
reply by the author on 24-May-2019
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This is a lovely tribute to your parents and the way they brought you up. In being selfless in their love, they set a fine example for you to emulate. It is a rare thing today to see someone truly give of themselves without expecting anything in return. Treasure their gift.
I'm walking now toward their gift
a love for life and strength to know
to pause my own if someone finds
they need my glove of selfless love
Comment Written 24-May-2019
reply by the author on 24-May-2019
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Thank you very much
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem about love, the first example we have in our lives are the love of our parents to each other as well as towards us as children. Parents' biggest job is to teach their children to love and forgive.
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A very well-written poem about love, the first example we have in our lives are the love of our parents to each other as well as towards us as children. Parents' biggest job is to teach their children to love and forgive.
Comment Written 24-May-2019
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Thank you very much
Comment from TPAC
I'm a believer, finding a delighting array of treats in this presented write, touching sentiments gripping to heart, sounded clear message conveyed by writer. All stated in my opinion.
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I'm a believer, finding a delighting array of treats in this presented write, touching sentiments gripping to heart, sounded clear message conveyed by writer. All stated in my opinion.
Comment Written 24-May-2019
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Thank you very much
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
No one but parents understands, protect and care your state of selfless love your strength for survival; well said, well done. Thank you for sharing. Write to inspire, change -- DR ALCREATOR
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No one but parents understands, protect and care your state of selfless love your strength for survival; well said, well done. Thank you for sharing. Write to inspire, change -- DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 24-May-2019
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Thank you very much
Comment from jenintorre
This is a wonderful poem about love. What can be greater than a parents love for a child?. This poem has perfect rhyme and rhythm. I wish you lots of luck in the competition. Best wishes. Jen
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This is a wonderful poem about love. What can be greater than a parents love for a child?. This poem has perfect rhyme and rhythm. I wish you lots of luck in the competition. Best wishes. Jen
Comment Written 24-May-2019
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Thank you very much
Comment from Willie P. Smith
Unfortunately, I am out of six stars. This a very touching and warm poem.
Your rhyme at the end of the stanza is superb. I can't see any area of this poem that needs work. You have done excellent.
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Unfortunately, I am out of six stars. This a very touching and warm poem.
Your rhyme at the end of the stanza is superb. I can't see any area of this poem that needs work. You have done excellent.
Comment Written 24-May-2019
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Wow! thank you very much
Comment from Sandra Montanino
Well, this poem is supposed to be about love and that it is. It's a very sensitive and powerful poem. I am sure you do well in the contest. You have the talent. Good job.
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reply by the author on 24-May-2019
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Well, this poem is supposed to be about love and that it is. It's a very sensitive and powerful poem. I am sure you do well in the contest. You have the talent. Good job.
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Comment Written 24-May-2019
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Thank you very much
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
If only our babies could speak, this is what they would say as we try and understand their needs and give them everything we can in life, I enjoyed every word here, love Dolly x
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If only our babies could speak, this is what they would say as we try and understand their needs and give them everything we can in life, I enjoyed every word here, love Dolly x
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Comment Written 24-May-2019
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Thank you very much****kahpot
