Comment from Earl Corp

Excellent

Honey We Blew up the Chicken and Corn. This covers both children and adults, the right illustrator could make it into a book for you. Your poem rhymed, made sense, and entertained me. Nice job.

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 Comment Written 24-May-2019

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reply by the author on 24-May-2019

Thanks so much, I have published kids books and I have never grown up so they are a good fit for me. =}

Comment from Alex Rosel

Excellent

Ha, ha. A highly entertaining poem. I like the dominance of the two-lined stanzas. This structure gives the words succinct, punchy impact. And as for the image you've chosen to accompany your work, that's fantastic, full of attitude. Thank you for brightening my day :)

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 Comment Written 24-May-2019

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reply by the author on 24-May-2019

Thanks so much. I'm glad I made you smile. Have a good day.