Woast Wabbit
Ghost Poem contest entry24 total reviews
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Okay -- I read the whole thing through just fine (of course, I was a big Looney Tunes fan growing up.... explains a lot, doesn't it? LOL!) without even knowing you had that huge translated compendium in your notes... Because, if one knows Elmer Fudd, you did an EXCELLENT job on your linguistics' masterpiece here!! ;) :) Absolutely enjoyed the heck out of your mixing the cartoon genre with the fun-horror genre -- you have great rhythm and flow and everything just truly works together to keep your reader 'hooked in' the whole way -- no stumbling, just plain fun (and memories with that voice!) line after line! :) If I had a 6-er, I wood certainwy give it to you! :) ;) Great job and best of luck to you at the polls! :)
reply by the author on 24-May-2019
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Okay -- I read the whole thing through just fine (of course, I was a big Looney Tunes fan growing up.... explains a lot, doesn't it? LOL!) without even knowing you had that huge translated compendium in your notes... Because, if one knows Elmer Fudd, you did an EXCELLENT job on your linguistics' masterpiece here!! ;) :) Absolutely enjoyed the heck out of your mixing the cartoon genre with the fun-horror genre -- you have great rhythm and flow and everything just truly works together to keep your reader 'hooked in' the whole way -- no stumbling, just plain fun (and memories with that voice!) line after line! :) If I had a 6-er, I wood certainwy give it to you! :) ;) Great job and best of luck to you at the polls! :)
Comment Written 23-May-2019
reply by the author on 24-May-2019
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Thank you so much for the fantastic review and the big six offer, Yvette. Yes, I grew up on them too and always loved their silliness. I dearly appreciate the gracious rating and good luck wishes. I'm glad you liked my goofy offering. Have a great weekend. Thank you again.
Comment from robyn corum
Dear Mystery Writer,
hahaha! I have to tell you - I didn't think you could pull all this off AND a clever ending -- but you did! HUZZAH! This was just too cute. There were a few words in there that I thought you should have also had mangled in that crazy style, but it all worked anyway. Thanks for the smile and GOOD LUCK!
reply by the author on 24-May-2019
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Dear Mystery Writer,
hahaha! I have to tell you - I didn't think you could pull all this off AND a clever ending -- but you did! HUZZAH! This was just too cute. There were a few words in there that I thought you should have also had mangled in that crazy style, but it all worked anyway. Thanks for the smile and GOOD LUCK!
Comment Written 23-May-2019
reply by the author on 24-May-2019
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Thank you for the fantastic review and the gracious stars, Robyn. I really appreciate the generous stars and good luck wishes. I'm glad you had a chuckle at this silliness. Have a great weekend.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This poem tells a story of ghost of Bugs, the pronunciation of the ghost is peculiar and hard, you ate a poison; then mystery; well said, well done. Write to inspire, change -- DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 24-May-2019
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This poem tells a story of ghost of Bugs, the pronunciation of the ghost is peculiar and hard, you ate a poison; then mystery; well said, well done. Write to inspire, change -- DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 23-May-2019
reply by the author on 24-May-2019
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Thank you for the great review, Dr. Al. I really appreciate the generous stars.
Comment from victor 66
I am most impressed that you put this much effort into a ghost story concerning Elmer Fudd and the demise of bugs bunny. I thought it was hilarious and filled with so much humor and, a ghost story to boot. Best wishes.
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reply by the author on 24-May-2019
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I am most impressed that you put this much effort into a ghost story concerning Elmer Fudd and the demise of bugs bunny. I thought it was hilarious and filled with so much humor and, a ghost story to boot. Best wishes.
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Comment Written 23-May-2019
reply by the author on 24-May-2019
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Thank you for the excellent review and the generous stars, Victor. I'm glad you liked this silly piece. Have a great weekend.
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Yes I did certain way like your rabbit story. You're welcome. Best wishes.
