Eye Catching
A 2-4-2 contest entry15 total reviews
Comment from Teri7
This is a very beautiful 2-4-2 poem you have penned about the beauty in a lovely autumn day. You used very good words and beautiful imagery from the art work you chose. Best wishes in the contest. Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 27-May-2019
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This is a very beautiful 2-4-2 poem you have penned about the beauty in a lovely autumn day. You used very good words and beautiful imagery from the art work you chose. Best wishes in the contest. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 23-May-2019
reply by the author on 27-May-2019
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Hi Teri17 Thanks so much for your positive review and it was lovely driving along and thought I would create this poem to share Cheers Christine
Comment from aryr
What a beautiful picture Christine. Your words definitely captured the essence of that picture. I like the way the trees, the leaves and their golden color seem to arch the road making a beautiful tunnel to drive through. Well done.
reply by the author on 27-May-2019
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What a beautiful picture Christine. Your words definitely captured the essence of that picture. I like the way the trees, the leaves and their golden color seem to arch the road making a beautiful tunnel to drive through. Well done.
Comment Written 23-May-2019
reply by the author on 27-May-2019
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Hi Ary, Thaks so much and yes it is a lovely image and I though may reflect my thoughts as I was driving along through lovely golden trees. Winter soon so rug up and sit by the fire Will be my agenda LOL Cheers as always and a hug Christine
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You are so welcome Christine, stay warm
Comment from Sugarray77
Great job on this short, but beautiful poem for the 2-4-2 contest, Christine. I enjoyed the photography that so enhances this entry. The words and the presentation are lovely. Good luck.
Melissa
reply by the author on 27-May-2019
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Great job on this short, but beautiful poem for the 2-4-2 contest, Christine. I enjoyed the photography that so enhances this entry. The words and the presentation are lovely. Good luck.
Melissa
Comment Written 23-May-2019
reply by the author on 27-May-2019
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Hi Melissa, Thanks for your review and yes the short poem are sometimes a challenge and the golden trees gave me a subject to share .We are soon to have winter so that will be gloves and warm fires Brrrr LOL
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
State of the scene in autumn is eye-catching as the leaves of autumn all around makes a golden stunning view; well said, well done. Write to inspire, change -- DR ALCREATOR
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reply by the author on 27-May-2019
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State of the scene in autumn is eye-catching as the leaves of autumn all around makes a golden stunning view; well said, well done. Write to inspire, change -- DR ALCREATOR
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Comment Written 23-May-2019
reply by the author on 27-May-2019
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Hi DR ALCREATOR, Thanks for reading my poem and I think at times a thought will appear and Needed to be written down so this contest was a good vehicle for that Cheers Christine
Comment from Alex Rosel
A nice entry for the 2-4-2 poetry competition. The last line is especially full of impact; and the construct, finishing the previous line with an em dash, enhances the forcefulness.
Good luck with this in the contest :)
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reply by the author on 27-May-2019
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A nice entry for the 2-4-2 poetry competition. The last line is especially full of impact; and the construct, finishing the previous line with an em dash, enhances the forcefulness.
Good luck with this in the contest :)
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Comment Written 23-May-2019
reply by the author on 27-May-2019
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Hi Axel. Thanks very much for your review glad you like the last line I thought it summed up my thoughts while driving through the lovely trees. The emdash was for that reason so glad it worked Cheers for your good luck also Christine
