Rainbow Unicorn
A rainbow unicorn taught me a lesson27 total reviews
Comment from Sandra Elizabeth Williams
Hello Pam, for me, I like the vibrant colours of the unicorn, however, (please don't take this the wrong way) I thought he looked more like a donkey. I was surprised by the lollipops surrounding the unicorn, which are nice.
I do hope the little one will be receptive to the new painting. I had a look at it and think it is more suitable. :-)
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Hello Pam, for me, I like the vibrant colours of the unicorn, however, (please don't take this the wrong way) I thought he looked more like a donkey. I was surprised by the lollipops surrounding the unicorn, which are nice.
I do hope the little one will be receptive to the new painting. I had a look at it and think it is more suitable. :-)
Comment Written 23-May-2019
Comment from Sugarray77
Hey, Pam... good morning. You have written a very perceptive poem about Savannah and your different perceptions of a rainbow unicorn. Great job on the verse and your rhyme choices. I enjoyed reading it.
Melissa
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Hey, Pam... good morning. You have written a very perceptive poem about Savannah and your different perceptions of a rainbow unicorn. Great job on the verse and your rhyme choices. I enjoyed reading it.
Melissa
Comment Written 23-May-2019
Comment from Earl Corp
I think the first one you did was awesome, but art is in the eye of the beholder. Your poem rhymed, made sense, and entertained me. Very nice job.
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I think the first one you did was awesome, but art is in the eye of the beholder. Your poem rhymed, made sense, and entertained me. Very nice job.
Comment Written 23-May-2019
Comment from Heather Knight
I like both unicorns, but you are right, the other one is more appropriate for children.
I enjoyed reading the story you tell in your poem and the notes.
Thanks for sharing.
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I like both unicorns, but you are right, the other one is more appropriate for children.
I enjoyed reading the story you tell in your poem and the notes.
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 23-May-2019
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A fine write Pam and of course your painting is magical too! Children, mainly girls believe in unicorns and their magic and you brought that magic to your words here Pam, love Dolly x
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A fine write Pam and of course your painting is magical too! Children, mainly girls believe in unicorns and their magic and you brought that magic to your words here Pam, love Dolly x
Comment Written 23-May-2019
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Likeness is the cause of concern, not age or other factors, we should care the person's interest; children wish desire fulfillment the most; well said, well done. Write to inspire, change -- DR ALCREATOR
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Likeness is the cause of concern, not age or other factors, we should care the person's interest; children wish desire fulfillment the most; well said, well done. Write to inspire, change -- DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 23-May-2019
Comment from Patty Palmer
I liked your poem. Too often when we are asked to do something we forget about who asked for it, what they might like. My brother-n-law passed away recently. I was asked to write a poem for the little funeral. At first I was all into heaven and all that. Then I stopped and thought about the poem being for him! He was an avid biker his whole life so my poem now is titled "Are There Harley's in Heaven" After the funeral I will post it.
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I liked your poem. Too often when we are asked to do something we forget about who asked for it, what they might like. My brother-n-law passed away recently. I was asked to write a poem for the little funeral. At first I was all into heaven and all that. Then I stopped and thought about the poem being for him! He was an avid biker his whole life so my poem now is titled "Are There Harley's in Heaven" After the funeral I will post it.
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Comment Written 23-May-2019
