Comment from Sally Law

Excellent

Perfection indeed. Only a month until I will be sitting in shaded bliss! We are counting the days. A lovely rondeau in praise of salt life and its diverse pleasures.
Always my best,
Sal xo

 Comment Written 22-May-2019

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reply by the author on 22-May-2019

Thanks so much, Sweet Sal. I know you will have a lovely trip.

Melissa

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

It sounds like you have a lot of fun not his beach Melissa and I think you read my mind here because I wrote a beach poem too, but in a different form. This looks quite complicated to write and I think you did a great job, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 22-May-2019

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reply by the author on 22-May-2019

Thank you so much. I am still remembering all of our fun times last week and writing about it is fun. Thanks bunches, my friend.

Melissa

Comment from Janice Canerdy

Excellent

I really like this format, which rollicks along, then slows down, then speeds up again. Your poem makes great use of specific details that
describe a wonderful vacation day.

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 Comment Written 22-May-2019

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reply by the author on 22-May-2019

Thanks so very much, Janice. It is a fun format... hope you try it.

Melissa

Comment from Maria Millsaps

Good

Trinet Poerty has three stanzas with seven lines. The format of this poem gives the appearance of the lines being more than seven lines.
Sound as if you had a blast.

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 Comment Written 22-May-2019

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reply by the author on 22-May-2019

Thank you, Maria... I enlarged the font a bit, maybe that is why it looks like more lines.

Melissa

reply by Maria Millsaps on 27-May-2019

Good idea. Good luck.