Seaside Reverie
Trinet Poetry24 total reviews
Comment from judiverse
Such excellent work with your vocabulary in this. The adjectives are vivid and help us visualize. "Wiggle" and "giggle" are very vivid verbs. You know how to add color to the scene. You give great details about the seaside memories beachgoers can take home--the food at the café, the relaxation, the sand castles. Beautifully done. judi
reply by the author on 28-May-2019
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Such excellent work with your vocabulary in this. The adjectives are vivid and help us visualize. "Wiggle" and "giggle" are very vivid verbs. You know how to add color to the scene. You give great details about the seaside memories beachgoers can take home--the food at the café, the relaxation, the sand castles. Beautifully done. judi
Comment Written 27-May-2019
reply by the author on 28-May-2019
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Hi Judi... thanks so much for the great review. We had such a good time on our trip that I had to write about it.
Melissa
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You're welcome. Glad you enjoyed. You'll have pleasant memories. judi
Comment from PoemsOfDD
I know, I know... I am a tad behind on quite a bit of my reviewing but glad I finally got round to this one. This is a fun and uplifting trinet poem. Its content is so enjoyable, I fear I many pause my reviewing again and take a trip to the beach :-) Thank you for sharing and inspiring. ~DD
reply by the author on 26-May-2019
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I know, I know... I am a tad behind on quite a bit of my reviewing but glad I finally got round to this one. This is a fun and uplifting trinet poem. Its content is so enjoyable, I fear I many pause my reviewing again and take a trip to the beach :-) Thank you for sharing and inspiring. ~DD
Comment Written 25-May-2019
reply by the author on 26-May-2019
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I appreciate your great review, DD. I hope you are able to run to the beach and lay around relaxing for a few days. Hahah.. sail away.. Thanks.
Melissa
Comment from Aussie
You have aptly described our way of life in Oz. So used to pristine beaches, beautiful oceans and the dolphins, we take all for granted. I loved your poem, something magic about visiting the beach, the children love it and the smell of the sea clears the mind and we all come home exhausted. Well done friend.
reply by the author on 24-May-2019
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You have aptly described our way of life in Oz. So used to pristine beaches, beautiful oceans and the dolphins, we take all for granted. I loved your poem, something magic about visiting the beach, the children love it and the smell of the sea clears the mind and we all come home exhausted. Well done friend.
Comment Written 24-May-2019
reply by the author on 24-May-2019
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Thanks so much, Aussie. We had such fun last week at the beach that I just had to write about it. Haha. I am so glad you can relate to my experiences there.
Melissa
Comment from Willie P. Smith
This is excellent. You have a lot of rhyme that speaks of revelry on the
beach. I never did much ocean swimming. With my luck I would have run
smack into jaws. Sharks give me the willies. Very good poem.
reply by the author on 23-May-2019
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This is excellent. You have a lot of rhyme that speaks of revelry on the
beach. I never did much ocean swimming. With my luck I would have run
smack into jaws. Sharks give me the willies. Very good poem.
Comment Written 23-May-2019
reply by the author on 23-May-2019
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Thank you so much... we had a lot of fun last week and I just thought I would share it in a verse. I am delighted that you liked it.
Melissa
Comment from robyn corum
Melissa,
What a beautiful presentation and representation of a weekend at the beach (or even just a few hours, at that!) This was a lot of fun - and brought many happy moments and memories to mind. Thanks a bunch!
reply by the author on 23-May-2019
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Melissa,
What a beautiful presentation and representation of a weekend at the beach (or even just a few hours, at that!) This was a lot of fun - and brought many happy moments and memories to mind. Thanks a bunch!
Comment Written 23-May-2019
reply by the author on 23-May-2019
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Thanks so much, Robyn. We really had a good time last week... and I have the sunburn to prove it!! Haha.
Melissa
Comment from Mistydawn
What a descriptive poem. I felt like I was there. It took me back to the times I spent with the kids. The sandcastle challenges, lol. It's very well-written, interesting. Your great word choice takes the reader on the beach with you. Great job.
reply by the author on 23-May-2019
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What a descriptive poem. I felt like I was there. It took me back to the times I spent with the kids. The sandcastle challenges, lol. It's very well-written, interesting. Your great word choice takes the reader on the beach with you. Great job.
Comment Written 23-May-2019
reply by the author on 23-May-2019
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Hey, Misty! We had such fun last week that I just had to share it with you all. I am delighted that you liked it!! Have a great day!
Melissa
Comment from Joan E.
You certainly captured the joy you experienced at Virginia Beach in this Trinet Poem. I admired your rhymes, alliteration of "s's", repeats and energy, plus the clever "Neptune's buffet" . Big cheers- Joan
reply by the author on 23-May-2019
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You certainly captured the joy you experienced at Virginia Beach in this Trinet Poem. I admired your rhymes, alliteration of "s's", repeats and energy, plus the clever "Neptune's buffet" . Big cheers- Joan
Comment Written 23-May-2019
reply by the author on 23-May-2019
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Hey Joan! Thanks so much, my friend. We really had a ball last week and I have the sunburn to prove it... haha. I am delighted that you enjoyed this one.
Melissa
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Take care of the sunburn and continue to relish the memories. Hugs- Joan
Comment from Y. M. Roger
This is a feast for the senses, Melissa! ;) I cannot express just how spot on your chosen phrases and rolling, gentle rhythm are - oh my goodness, I am captivated and my mind is drawn to that intoxicating salt air! ;) You've employed the trinet format here better than I've read in a while....if I had a remaining 6-er, know it would be yours...;) Yvette
reply by the author on 23-May-2019
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This is a feast for the senses, Melissa! ;) I cannot express just how spot on your chosen phrases and rolling, gentle rhythm are - oh my goodness, I am captivated and my mind is drawn to that intoxicating salt air! ;) You've employed the trinet format here better than I've read in a while....if I had a remaining 6-er, know it would be yours...;) Yvette
Comment Written 23-May-2019
reply by the author on 23-May-2019
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Thanks so much for the lovely review, Yvette. We had such fun last week that I wanted to share it and had not written a Trinet in a while... so thought I would. I appreciate your enthusiastic comments.
Melissa
Comment from Heather Knight
My husband and daughter love the beach. I have to confess I like looking at the sea, but I prefer swimming in the pool (sad, I know).
I love the shape of your poem, the rhyme and the repeated line.
Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 23-May-2019
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My husband and daughter love the beach. I have to confess I like looking at the sea, but I prefer swimming in the pool (sad, I know).
I love the shape of your poem, the rhyme and the repeated line.
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 23-May-2019
reply by the author on 23-May-2019
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Maria, I really appreciate your great review. We had such a good time on our get away that I had to write about it!!
Melissa
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Trinet poem about the fun we can have on the Sandy beach. Building sand casales, or bathing in the sun, or play in the cool water on a very hot dayou.
reply by the author on 23-May-2019
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A very well-written Trinet poem about the fun we can have on the Sandy beach. Building sand casales, or bathing in the sun, or play in the cool water on a very hot dayou.
Comment Written 23-May-2019
reply by the author on 23-May-2019
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Thank you Sandra!
Melissa
