Bounce
Love's reflections and vibrations.14 total reviews
Comment from Megan Wintrow
I am loving your alliteration. And you're a good man, er... poet... uh... Poetess! Seriously, it takes real talent to see things through the eyes of another person, let alone another sex . Awesome!
reply by the author on 25-May-2019
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I am loving your alliteration. And you're a good man, er... poet... uh... Poetess! Seriously, it takes real talent to see things through the eyes of another person, let alone another sex . Awesome!
Comment Written 25-May-2019
reply by the author on 25-May-2019
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I'm pleased you found this one of mine to review. I think it is a good one and it delights me that you do too, in such a starry manner.
Comment from Kamisah Karim
Very nicely written.A sweet and sincere thought of love for the woman he loves
Your imageries are very effective tools to show a male character as the poet.Good job.I like the way it sounds when I read it as well. A good job done here Lisa.
reply by the author on 23-May-2019
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Very nicely written.A sweet and sincere thought of love for the woman he loves
Your imageries are very effective tools to show a male character as the poet.Good job.I like the way it sounds when I read it as well. A good job done here Lisa.
Comment Written 23-May-2019
reply by the author on 23-May-2019
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Thank you Kamisah... glad you like it!
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Welcome.
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Welcome.
Comment from TPAC
Writer has a lot of energy, whether solely illustrated in mind, or youth enthusiasm, finding it a recharge to my dead cells. A pleasurable trip in my opinion.
reply by the author on 23-May-2019
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Writer has a lot of energy, whether solely illustrated in mind, or youth enthusiasm, finding it a recharge to my dead cells. A pleasurable trip in my opinion.
Comment Written 22-May-2019
reply by the author on 23-May-2019
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I'm pleased you enjoyed the trip and many thanks for your review.
Comment from lyenochka
I love how this poem begins because it's something I feel we have that here as we bounce our ideas off each other as "safe sounding boards."
But with the whole sequence of "Bounce" verses, I get a picture of someone who loves everything about the beloved - her thoughts, her emotions and her physical being and desire to keep exploring.
reply by the author on 22-May-2019
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I love how this poem begins because it's something I feel we have that here as we bounce our ideas off each other as "safe sounding boards."
But with the whole sequence of "Bounce" verses, I get a picture of someone who loves everything about the beloved - her thoughts, her emotions and her physical being and desire to keep exploring.
Comment Written 22-May-2019
reply by the author on 22-May-2019
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I agree with you about this site... some people feel attacked by comments, but those of us who appreciate critical feedback should feel comfortable enough. Egos get in the way of listening sometimes.
Ye, my poem does develop as a nice relationship... I put the bouncing baby in to seal the deal. Boys are usually referred to as 'bouncing baby boy' so I made it a girl just to show that girls are bouncy too.
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I was glad it was a girl! I almost wanted the poem to end there and have the bouncing around the globe before it.
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Good idea to change the sequence... after all, that sort of behaviour obviously led to creating the baby.
And then it will end on looking to the future. If I had a reviewer nomination left you'd get it for the suggestion. Thanks.
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I always run out of those too fast, too! Glad you liked my suggestion! ♥
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-wrtten poem from the point of view of the male who like to see the love of his life bouncing of joy in everything she does that will make him happy too.
reply by the author on 22-May-2019
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A very well-wrtten poem from the point of view of the male who like to see the love of his life bouncing of joy in everything she does that will make him happy too.
Comment Written 22-May-2019
reply by the author on 22-May-2019
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Nice review, thanks Sandra. I am pleased that you noted it is mutual pleasure they are sharing, whether doing it alone or together.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Your last stanza made me smile Lisa, well you certainly have some energy here with some positive vibes! I hope your ideas take off and bounce up to the stars, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 22-May-2019
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Your last stanza made me smile Lisa, well you certainly have some energy here with some positive vibes! I hope your ideas take off and bounce up to the stars, love Dolly x
Comment Written 22-May-2019
reply by the author on 22-May-2019
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That last stanza is making a few people smile. It reminded me I need to buy a new bra for some uplift. Maybe I can write a poem featuring 'uplifting' moments as opposed to bouncing ones. I'll get to mention breasts again.
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, Bounce, finds the joy in actions throughout life and the people we encounter or produce. "Bounce your breasts" a great one.
reply by the author on 22-May-2019
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This poem, Bounce, finds the joy in actions throughout life and the people we encounter or produce. "Bounce your breasts" a great one.
Comment Written 22-May-2019
reply by the author on 22-May-2019
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I thought you boys might enjoy that last stanza.
Thanks for the positive review Bill.
Comment from Teri7
Lisa, This is a very well written poem and your title is very appropriate for the words you used. I love the images I saw in my minds eye as I read your words and very nice imagery from the art work you chose. Thanks for sharing. love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 22-May-2019
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Lisa, This is a very well written poem and your title is very appropriate for the words you used. I love the images I saw in my minds eye as I read your words and very nice imagery from the art work you chose. Thanks for sharing. love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 22-May-2019
reply by the author on 22-May-2019
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Thanks for your very positive feedback Teri. Blessings to you too.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
A fun and bouncy offering for the morning, ma'am -- and, yeah, I assume a male persona many times in my writings.... maybe there's some psycho-analysis term for it some where.... I just prefer to go with just plain 'psycho'... LOL! :) thanx for sharing! :) Yvette
reply by the author on 22-May-2019
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A fun and bouncy offering for the morning, ma'am -- and, yeah, I assume a male persona many times in my writings.... maybe there's some psycho-analysis term for it some where.... I just prefer to go with just plain 'psycho'... LOL! :) thanx for sharing! :) Yvette
Comment Written 22-May-2019
reply by the author on 22-May-2019
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Hey there fellow psycho... maybe it's cos I noticed when I was younger that boys had more fun that girls (it's not true of course).
Thanks for your bouncy review.
Comment from Richard J
Gosh, Lisa!
The sweetly alluring ways you put it, who could not wish to bounce along with you into your world ... surely, you know what appeals to the male psyche quite well. ; )
Such a lovely, easy flowing, heart fetching piece to catch the mind's-eye and captivate one's most creatively willing imagination to "come along" and join-in with You.
Romance must be your middle name, 'cause you sure set my heartstrings aglow; especially, with that final verse ... oh-MY! Yeah, typical male, I know. ; )~
Beautiful poeming, Lisa ... I love the picture choice, font and color choices, too ... big, happy hug! ~ Richard
reply by the author on 22-May-2019
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Gosh, Lisa!
The sweetly alluring ways you put it, who could not wish to bounce along with you into your world ... surely, you know what appeals to the male psyche quite well. ; )
Such a lovely, easy flowing, heart fetching piece to catch the mind's-eye and captivate one's most creatively willing imagination to "come along" and join-in with You.
Romance must be your middle name, 'cause you sure set my heartstrings aglow; especially, with that final verse ... oh-MY! Yeah, typical male, I know. ; )~
Beautiful poeming, Lisa ... I love the picture choice, font and color choices, too ... big, happy hug! ~ Richard
Comment Written 22-May-2019
reply by the author on 22-May-2019
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Well now, what a wonderful review. I will have to put breasts into my poems more often!! I give your review a 6 for affirming my poem. Thanks very much Richard.
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'Twas a pleasurable time spent with you. : )
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For me too Richard.
