They Dared To Try
A tribute for all who dared34 total reviews
Comment from kiwigirl2821
Hi Jay
I enjoyed the writing, message, delivery and philosophy! Many people do great things and you are exactly right, they sure don't expect to not accomplish the task. The rhythm and flow is smooth and just the right pace. Wonderful write for this reader. xoxo Kiwi
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Hi Jay
I enjoyed the writing, message, delivery and philosophy! Many people do great things and you are exactly right, they sure don't expect to not accomplish the task. The rhythm and flow is smooth and just the right pace. Wonderful write for this reader. xoxo Kiwi
Comment Written 24-May-2019
Comment from Rmocruz
I find this solidly rhymed verse to be an inspiring tribute to history's
late, great historical heroes. Your valid message still holds true today.
I enjoyed reading this well-penned poem.
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I find this solidly rhymed verse to be an inspiring tribute to history's
late, great historical heroes. Your valid message still holds true today.
I enjoyed reading this well-penned poem.
Comment Written 24-May-2019
Comment from TPAC
A lovely drifting flow detailed in this particular write, given ride like upon water current a easy cruise down stream. Person effortless reaches their goal of an arrival. All stated in my opinion.
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A lovely drifting flow detailed in this particular write, given ride like upon water current a easy cruise down stream. Person effortless reaches their goal of an arrival. All stated in my opinion.
Comment Written 24-May-2019
Comment from Patty Palmer
This was really good. The story line was interesting. The rhyme and rhythm was very good. I like the poems a little bouncy. All in all a great read!
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This was really good. The story line was interesting. The rhyme and rhythm was very good. I like the poems a little bouncy. All in all a great read!
Comment Written 23-May-2019
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
A lovely tribute to those who created and tread the path before us. They dared and they won and so we should recognize that Is basically what life is all about. To find our niche and follow persistently until we find success. One thing comes first... know thyself.
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A lovely tribute to those who created and tread the path before us. They dared and they won and so we should recognize that Is basically what life is all about. To find our niche and follow persistently until we find success. One thing comes first... know thyself.
Comment Written 23-May-2019
Comment from khwrites
Earning a place in the sun is such a prize. I'd say you have won a place in the sun, inspiring everyone to dream. The call to action is strong. Dreaming alone doesn't earn a place in the sun.
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Earning a place in the sun is such a prize. I'd say you have won a place in the sun, inspiring everyone to dream. The call to action is strong. Dreaming alone doesn't earn a place in the sun.
Comment Written 23-May-2019
Comment from Sandra Elizabeth Williams
Nothing tried, nothing gained, therefore we must try. Fear is no reason not to, for we can do many things afraid.
Awesome and uplifting words, Jaybird. We all need to be reminded. Thank you very much.
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Nothing tried, nothing gained, therefore we must try. Fear is no reason not to, for we can do many things afraid.
Awesome and uplifting words, Jaybird. We all need to be reminded. Thank you very much.
Comment Written 23-May-2019
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello jaybird1
I like your tribute for all who dared
"They Dared To Try"
I like this one with a smile for them
Do not the Lincoln's, King's and Frost's
with visions bold and tall,
dare chase their dreams and thus enlarge
many vistas for us all?
Why the question mark after the last line of your poem.
Gert
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Hello jaybird1
I like your tribute for all who dared
"They Dared To Try"
I like this one with a smile for them
Do not the Lincoln's, King's and Frost's
with visions bold and tall,
dare chase their dreams and thus enlarge
many vistas for us all?
Why the question mark after the last line of your poem.
Gert
Comment Written 23-May-2019
Comment from Gail Denham
Good job - and true - they deserve their day in the sun - a few typos I think - altho the poem still reads ok - and a few rhythm places that could be stronger - for ex: "and win for all mankind" - don't need the "of"
Just my opinion.
Nice job.
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Good job - and true - they deserve their day in the sun - a few typos I think - altho the poem still reads ok - and a few rhythm places that could be stronger - for ex: "and win for all mankind" - don't need the "of"
Just my opinion.
Nice job.
Comment Written 23-May-2019
Comment from Roxanna Andrews
The hardest thing is that first step towards changing the world. It may not be too popular, what you are trying to do, and the road may be very rough, but perseverance is the key. Well done sir.
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The hardest thing is that first step towards changing the world. It may not be too popular, what you are trying to do, and the road may be very rough, but perseverance is the key. Well done sir.
Comment Written 23-May-2019
