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Comment from Pearl Edwards
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Unfortunately lurking behind the prettiness is the infection that spreads. There are so many of them that we only hear about if we are affected, infected. Hope you are well Trisha,
cheers,
valda

 Comment Written 25-May-2019


reply by the author on 26-May-2019
    I have a major fight in health involving these. My choice is not good either way. That?s why I?m trying to get more exposure of the real danger of them. You?re so correct ? we only hear about if we are affected? it?s very scary, thank you so much for your wishes and review
    Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written 2-4-2 poem about the killer bacteria Staphylococcus that penetrates the human body and breaking down the immune system cannot fight it and all anti meds seem useless against it

 Comment Written 22-May-2019


reply by the author on 22-May-2019
    I am fighting with that now. I got the infection from hip surgery, and it is a scary scenario. Thanks for reviewing kindly
    Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Heather Knight
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You are right. It IS pretty. Unfortunately it's also lethal in some cases.
Lovely little poem and great presentation. I love the artwork.
Thanks so much for sharing and good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 22-May-2019


reply by the author on 22-May-2019
    Thanks for your kind review
    Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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So true and it took us a while to realise just how this enzyme kills, but now we know we have become super clean! I wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 22-May-2019


reply by the author on 22-May-2019
    Thanks for your kind review
    Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Sandra Montanino
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Well, you certainly put a warning out in just a few syllables. I think you will do great in your contest and your picture fits your poem very well. No wonder you are an accomplished poet with a high ranking!!

 Comment Written 21-May-2019


reply by the author on 21-May-2019
    Thank you so much for your complimentary review,
    Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
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Anywhere, anytime, in poor environment, bacteria may attack our body and silently invade our skin and may kill by Staphylococcus; well said, well done. Write to inspire, change -- DR ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 21-May-2019


reply by the author on 21-May-2019
    Thanks DR AL p, I appreciate your positive review,
    Hugs,Trisha
Comment from Bleeshor
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How would you describe
Bacteria in 8 syllables? I'm not sure I could. Bucketlist, however, in my opinion, was successful. Pretty silent killers invade.

 Comment Written 21-May-2019


reply by the author on 21-May-2019
    Thank you so much for your complimentary review,
    Hugs, Trisha
reply by Bleeshor on 22-May-2019
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Comment from 24chas
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This was a good read. I like the way you wrote this one and it made a lot of sense and showed how the form should be used to tell a whole story. Nice job.

 Comment Written 21-May-2019


reply by the author on 21-May-2019
    Thank you so much for your complimentary review,
    Hugs, Trisha
Comment from LisaMay
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Beautiful things can very often be harmful to us. Electron microscope images show us this beauty but such bacteria is a killer. You have chosen a very different topic to write about; I admire that.

 Comment Written 21-May-2019


reply by the author on 21-May-2019
    Thank you so much for your complimentary review,
    Hugs, Trisha