My Life
Reflecting on my life30 total reviews
Comment from dragonpoet
If your body isn't healthy, your mind is. You have a good view on death. You've lived a full life with a big loving family. What a busy mother and father you must have had. Despite the rough start, with all the sickness you had to overcome, you had a lot of experiences to treasure.
Keep writing
Joan
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If your body isn't healthy, your mind is. You have a good view on death. You've lived a full life with a big loving family. What a busy mother and father you must have had. Despite the rough start, with all the sickness you had to overcome, you had a lot of experiences to treasure.
Keep writing
Joan
Comment Written 26-Jun-2019
Comment from evesayshi
In my opinion a stark reflection in smoothly fluid rhyming rhythm - a soliloquy of one's life in both acceptance and vision. I regret I have no more Six Stars. I am sorry to hear you are ill, and I hope your life continues indefinitely and comfortably, with warm and joyful activities...
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In my opinion a stark reflection in smoothly fluid rhyming rhythm - a soliloquy of one's life in both acceptance and vision. I regret I have no more Six Stars. I am sorry to hear you are ill, and I hope your life continues indefinitely and comfortably, with warm and joyful activities...
Comment Written 23-May-2019
Comment from Gail Denham
A wonderful comment and look at your life. The rhyme is excellent. I would pray that you are assured of where you will be when you leave this earth. And by this I mean accepting Jesus - His forgiveness for sins (we are born with sin - selfish to the core I believe)- asking Him to be your Saviour and guide you lovingly into heaven.
None of us is assured one more day - as I near the next big b-day-I realize this more and more - my body collapses around me, but I know Jesus/God has my days numbered.
I want to read those nine more posts - and more.
Blessings and a prayer.
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A wonderful comment and look at your life. The rhyme is excellent. I would pray that you are assured of where you will be when you leave this earth. And by this I mean accepting Jesus - His forgiveness for sins (we are born with sin - selfish to the core I believe)- asking Him to be your Saviour and guide you lovingly into heaven.
None of us is assured one more day - as I near the next big b-day-I realize this more and more - my body collapses around me, but I know Jesus/God has my days numbered.
I want to read those nine more posts - and more.
Blessings and a prayer.
Comment Written 23-May-2019
Comment from nancyjam
What a great attitude. This conveys a wonderful message on
living and accepting life as it comes.
You've experienced some great moments. thanks for sharing them here.
I'm sorry you have been ill and I wish you lots more time.
Nancy
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What a great attitude. This conveys a wonderful message on
living and accepting life as it comes.
You've experienced some great moments. thanks for sharing them here.
I'm sorry you have been ill and I wish you lots more time.
Nancy
Comment Written 23-May-2019
Comment from kahpot
What a beautiful read and feeling in this poem is very positive although the outcome seems to be known, an excellent heart felt work, very well written and my best wishes go out to you****kahpot
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What a beautiful read and feeling in this poem is very positive although the outcome seems to be known, an excellent heart felt work, very well written and my best wishes go out to you****kahpot
Comment Written 22-May-2019
Comment from Gloria ....
Pam, so good to hear from you again. I've always enjoyed all your beautiful art and poetry and now you show up a picture of a terrific little kitty cat.
So glad to hear that you are still able to take great joy from life despite your flagging health. I hope to one day write a poem using your artwork that still stays in my mind of the red shoes and the snow leopard.
Looking forward to your next post. :)
Gloria
reply by the author on 23-May-2019
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Pam, so good to hear from you again. I've always enjoyed all your beautiful art and poetry and now you show up a picture of a terrific little kitty cat.
So glad to hear that you are still able to take great joy from life despite your flagging health. I hope to one day write a poem using your artwork that still stays in my mind of the red shoes and the snow leopard.
Looking forward to your next post. :)
Gloria
Comment Written 22-May-2019
reply by the author on 23-May-2019
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This web site has all of my art work. I think that one is called ?Startled Cub?. Click on index and the images will display alphabetically. Click on the thumbnail to see a larger image. Thank you for your interest in my art. You are welcome to use any image as long as you credit me. I hope to do at least one more mystery before I leave. People seem to like those. Thank you for this wonderful review
http://www.pamusart.com/
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Oh that's great news, Pam. I will be looking for it. :)
Comment from royowen
We have been good friends since you came onsite Pam, I'm much closer to the end than the beginning, so I relate. Before my encounter with God, I was where you are, but knowing there is something beyond is comforting but the experience of the end remains a mystery. Beautifully written my friend, in your original style, sad but looking forward to your last posts, well done, au revoir, blessings, Roy
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We have been good friends since you came onsite Pam, I'm much closer to the end than the beginning, so I relate. Before my encounter with God, I was where you are, but knowing there is something beyond is comforting but the experience of the end remains a mystery. Beautifully written my friend, in your original style, sad but looking forward to your last posts, well done, au revoir, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 22-May-2019
Comment from Heather Knight
Even if you are not looking for pity, I'm sorry to hear you are sick. I do hope you can get better.
Your poem is very beautiful. Thanks so much for sharing and good luck.
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Even if you are not looking for pity, I'm sorry to hear you are sick. I do hope you can get better.
Your poem is very beautiful. Thanks so much for sharing and good luck.
Comment Written 22-May-2019
Comment from l.raven
Hi Pam, I am soooooo sorry you are so very sick my sweet friend...I will miss you not being here...you shine like a bright light in our FanStory family...I hope you will be able to drop in once in awhile sweet girl...your poem is sad but very well written...I will miss your paintings...and mostly I will miss you...for now I will enjoy to poems you post...much love you....Linda xxoo
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Hi Pam, I am soooooo sorry you are so very sick my sweet friend...I will miss you not being here...you shine like a bright light in our FanStory family...I hope you will be able to drop in once in awhile sweet girl...your poem is sad but very well written...I will miss your paintings...and mostly I will miss you...for now I will enjoy to poems you post...much love you....Linda xxoo
Comment Written 21-May-2019
Comment from jenintorre
Pam, my friend. I didn't realise that you were so ill. How brave of you to bear your soul in this poem. It is so poignant and well written and has made me take stock of my own life as I have been very blessed with good health but no-one knows what is just around the corner. I am looking forward to reading all your poems.
Blessings. Jen. X
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Pam, my friend. I didn't realise that you were so ill. How brave of you to bear your soul in this poem. It is so poignant and well written and has made me take stock of my own life as I have been very blessed with good health but no-one knows what is just around the corner. I am looking forward to reading all your poems.
Blessings. Jen. X
Comment Written 21-May-2019
