Scene at a Writing Meeting
Pons and Ned and Bill talk about Fanstory15 total reviews
Comment from brenda faye curtis
Well, Bill, this was definitely different. I can't recall another time when you wrote yourself into a story. Was this an exercise in freestyle writing just to see how it would turn out? If so, it was not bad!
reply by the author on 26-May-2019
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Well, Bill, this was definitely different. I can't recall another time when you wrote yourself into a story. Was this an exercise in freestyle writing just to see how it would turn out? If so, it was not bad!
Comment Written 26-May-2019
reply by the author on 26-May-2019
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Thanks, Brenda. I'm actually in every story under an assumed name.
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Oh, cool! Have a blessed day, Bill!
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
The Dirty Dozen was one of my all time favourite films, and the other films, too, Bill. They don't make them as good anymore. I loved this script of the now very famous, Ned and Pons. They are a hilarious double act and would do well on the television. We don't have any really funny ones these days. Well done, my friend. :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 24-May-2019
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The Dirty Dozen was one of my all time favourite films, and the other films, too, Bill. They don't make them as good anymore. I loved this script of the now very famous, Ned and Pons. They are a hilarious double act and would do well on the television. We don't have any really funny ones these days. Well done, my friend. :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 24-May-2019
reply by the author on 24-May-2019
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Thanks, Sandra for the terrific review and endorsement.
Comment from Spitfire
Well, Bill, I'm with you on that catchy opening. Too much to do and not enough time. I liked the use of different colors for ease in reading. Delightful work on the misinterpretation of words.
reply by the author on 23-May-2019
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Well, Bill, I'm with you on that catchy opening. Too much to do and not enough time. I liked the use of different colors for ease in reading. Delightful work on the misinterpretation of words.
Comment Written 23-May-2019
reply by the author on 23-May-2019
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Thanks, Shari
Comment from lyenochka
What a great idea to catch us up on all your projects while having it all as part of a script which you cleverly said you didn't have time for!
One spelling comment as it wasn't Ned talking:
" a passible poem, " (passable)
reply by the author on 23-May-2019
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What a great idea to catch us up on all your projects while having it all as part of a script which you cleverly said you didn't have time for!
One spelling comment as it wasn't Ned talking:
" a passible poem, " (passable)
Comment Written 23-May-2019
reply by the author on 23-May-2019
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Thank you, lyenochka. Thunk I fixed that, but nope.
Comment from Earl Corp
This was cool that you had yourself interacting with Ned and Pons. I like Limericks a lot, that was a good collaboration with the boys. I hope you were able to get everything you needed done.
reply by the author on 22-May-2019
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This was cool that you had yourself interacting with Ned and Pons. I like Limericks a lot, that was a good collaboration with the boys. I hope you were able to get everything you needed done.
Comment Written 22-May-2019
reply by the author on 22-May-2019
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This chapter of Assassin Nation is introductory of some more characters and weaving them into the current and prior plots. Out today though.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Flabonga?! ;) Midst the three of ya, I do not think I want to know where that one came from! ;) How fun that you've included yourself with our script of the cheeky cousins today! ;) Thank you for sharing! :)Yvette
reply by the author on 22-May-2019
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Flabonga?! ;) Midst the three of ya, I do not think I want to know where that one came from! ;) How fun that you've included yourself with our script of the cheeky cousins today! ;) Thank you for sharing! :)Yvette
Comment Written 22-May-2019
reply by the author on 22-May-2019
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Thanks, Yvette. I was going to have him say, RAWHIDE! in keeping with the TV western theme. I may still.
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
This is dense with humor, and I loved it. Great idea to put yourself in it as a Fanstory writer. Write more of these, please. Brightens my day. I read and liked your limerick, but I don't review two-centers. :)
reply by the author on 21-May-2019
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This is dense with humor, and I loved it. Great idea to put yourself in it as a Fanstory writer. Write more of these, please. Brightens my day. I read and liked your limerick, but I don't review two-centers. :)
Comment Written 21-May-2019
reply by the author on 21-May-2019
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Thanks, Phyllis. I just write the poems to do it. They?ll never win a contest or stick in anyone?s mind. I appreciate your reading Pons and Ned.
Comment from Teri7
Bill, This is a really cute post of dialogue between you, Ned and Pons. I like that you all three were in it together chatting. This was really cute and entertaining. Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 21-May-2019
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Bill, This is a really cute post of dialogue between you, Ned and Pons. I like that you all three were in it together chatting. This was really cute and entertaining. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 21-May-2019
reply by the author on 21-May-2019
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Thanks, Teri
Comment from susand3022
FLABONGA! LOL... I just loved that!!! Did that one come from the Big Bang Theory? BAZINGA!!! LOL Too funny, I love these guys. This was a fun little script. I'll have to come up with another one, maybe after I finish Aurora and Alicia. I can't do too much at a time... it's just too much!!
reply by the author on 21-May-2019
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FLABONGA! LOL... I just loved that!!! Did that one come from the Big Bang Theory? BAZINGA!!! LOL Too funny, I love these guys. This was a fun little script. I'll have to come up with another one, maybe after I finish Aurora and Alicia. I can't do too much at a time... it's just too much!!
Comment Written 21-May-2019
reply by the author on 21-May-2019
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Thank you, Susan, for the kind review. Bill
Comment from nomi338
Methinks Mr. Schott, that you lead a most interesting life. Your interaction with what must be two of your favorite characters appear to give you much delight. I have developed somewhat of an enjoyment for them myself. This particular episode was enjoyable and I did get a certain kick out of reading it.
reply by the author on 21-May-2019
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Methinks Mr. Schott, that you lead a most interesting life. Your interaction with what must be two of your favorite characters appear to give you much delight. I have developed somewhat of an enjoyment for them myself. This particular episode was enjoyable and I did get a certain kick out of reading it.
Comment Written 21-May-2019
reply by the author on 21-May-2019
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Thanks, nomi. I appreciate the support.
