A Bunch Of Violets
A love story23 total reviews
Comment from Pearl Edwards
Lovely little story about a husband who actually does realise what his wife is missing from their relationship and does something about it. Enjoyed,
cheers,
valda
reply by the author on 28-May-2019
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Lovely little story about a husband who actually does realise what his wife is missing from their relationship and does something about it. Enjoyed,
cheers,
valda
Comment Written 27-May-2019
reply by the author on 28-May-2019
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Thanks for reading, Valda.
Comment from A. Willow Bends
Very nice! We all need to go back to the beginning on a regular basis and remember. So many couples do not and get in that rut and then crazy stuff does happen. I love this. You have made excellent points, but this couple needs to acknowledge soon before suspicion rears its ugly head!
Good job!
reply by the author on 29-May-2019
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Very nice! We all need to go back to the beginning on a regular basis and remember. So many couples do not and get in that rut and then crazy stuff does happen. I love this. You have made excellent points, but this couple needs to acknowledge soon before suspicion rears its ugly head!
Good job!
Comment Written 26-May-2019
reply by the author on 29-May-2019
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Yes, the husband needs to tell her.
Thanks for your review.
Comment from giraffmang
Hi MJ,
Another good little piece you've crafted here. The theme is a familiar one but the writing is crisp and on point.
Although I'd be worried about the wife keeping it a secret! What does that tell you? lol
All the best
G
reply by the author on 24-May-2019
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Hi MJ,
Another good little piece you've crafted here. The theme is a familiar one but the writing is crisp and on point.
Although I'd be worried about the wife keeping it a secret! What does that tell you? lol
All the best
G
Comment Written 23-May-2019
reply by the author on 24-May-2019
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Thanks so much for reading. Take care.
(I'm copying and pasting this reply as I have a lot of grading to do this week.)
Comment from Sugarray77
Great job, as usual, Maria. I really enjoyed the creative way you had Josh reignite their marriage. So sweet and I wish you would write a sequel so we can see her surprise... great job.
Melissa
reply by the author on 21-May-2019
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Great job, as usual, Maria. I really enjoyed the creative way you had Josh reignite their marriage. So sweet and I wish you would write a sequel so we can see her surprise... great job.
Melissa
Comment Written 20-May-2019
reply by the author on 21-May-2019
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Maybe... Will think about it. Thanks for the idea and for reading.
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
Sometimes that is all it takes is just to be noticed to bring back the glow and memories of what you used to feel like. This is a very well done story and one that I wish could happen more often
reply by the author on 21-May-2019
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Sometimes that is all it takes is just to be noticed to bring back the glow and memories of what you used to feel like. This is a very well done story and one that I wish could happen more often
Comment Written 20-May-2019
reply by the author on 21-May-2019
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Thanks for your kind review. Take care.
Comment from karenina
Oh isn't this precious? Now that's a husband so in tune he and his wife will be singing two part harmony forever I hope! Liza Minnelli sang a song on one of her old TV specials...and in it was a song I have long forgotten the title of. I DO remember one line that has stayed with me for near on twenty years:
"...And every rose upon the shelf, is one that I've supplied myself--
it's not the same I'm well aware, yet still I need to see them there..."
We women are simply pleased. It's not the mansion, the fancy car...it's the "rose upon the shelf." I really loved this sweet and gentle story.
Karenina
reply by the author on 21-May-2019
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Oh isn't this precious? Now that's a husband so in tune he and his wife will be singing two part harmony forever I hope! Liza Minnelli sang a song on one of her old TV specials...and in it was a song I have long forgotten the title of. I DO remember one line that has stayed with me for near on twenty years:
"...And every rose upon the shelf, is one that I've supplied myself--
it's not the same I'm well aware, yet still I need to see them there..."
We women are simply pleased. It's not the mansion, the fancy car...it's the "rose upon the shelf." I really loved this sweet and gentle story.
Karenina
Comment Written 20-May-2019
reply by the author on 21-May-2019
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Thanks for reading and for telling me about the Liza M. song.
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Oh well I do go on and on don't I? The important thing is I loved your write!--Karenina
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And I loved your review!
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Smile...you are very kind. AND patient!--K
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LOL
Comment from royowen
Good old Josh, sensitive enough to work out what the problem Lisa was and waiting for the right moment to tell her who the mystery "lover" was.a great post Maria, welll done, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 21-May-2019
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Good old Josh, sensitive enough to work out what the problem Lisa was and waiting for the right moment to tell her who the mystery "lover" was.a great post Maria, welll done, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 20-May-2019
reply by the author on 21-May-2019
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Thanks for reading, Roy.
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Welcome
Comment from LG Wolfe
Josh is a loving, wonderful husband, wise enough to know what he could rekindle on his own. He cares for her so much that he can see past his own insecurities. I also like the fact that the letters are one-sided.
reply by the author on 21-May-2019
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Josh is a loving, wonderful husband, wise enough to know what he could rekindle on his own. He cares for her so much that he can see past his own insecurities. I also like the fact that the letters are one-sided.
Comment Written 20-May-2019
reply by the author on 21-May-2019
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Thanks so much for reading.
Comment from Rikki66
Old dogs might not learn new tricks the just remember the tricks they have done before. Josh came to realize Lisa was unhappy and he went to old tricks to correct the problem. Excellent story.
reply by the author on 21-May-2019
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Old dogs might not learn new tricks the just remember the tricks they have done before. Josh came to realize Lisa was unhappy and he went to old tricks to correct the problem. Excellent story.
Comment Written 20-May-2019
reply by the author on 21-May-2019
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Thanks for your review. Have a nice day.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
What a wonderfully insightful husband to see the problem .... and then do something so wonderful about it! :) ;) Thanx for showing us that there may just be some hope out there for 'long-time' hubbies.. :) ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 21-May-2019
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What a wonderfully insightful husband to see the problem .... and then do something so wonderful about it! :) ;) Thanx for showing us that there may just be some hope out there for 'long-time' hubbies.. :) ;) Yvette
Comment Written 20-May-2019
reply by the author on 21-May-2019
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Thanks, Yvette. xxx
