a written love
a written century5 total reviews
Comment from Sandra Montanino
I am not a poet and obviously, you are a poet. So I have to say I am not familiar with this type of poetry. However, "love and time" are found as far back as ancient storytelling. Passion is always what connect time. Good job.
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2019
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I am not a poet and obviously, you are a poet. So I have to say I am not familiar with this type of poetry. However, "love and time" are found as far back as ancient storytelling. Passion is always what connect time. Good job.
Comment Written 23-May-2019
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2019
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thank you for the time of day for your review,sandra montanino! sorry for the late reply. "your so vein" means mood or humor.
your so vein
godlucifer
Comment from Earl Corp
I have been told I shouldn't review free verse poetry because I don't normally enjoy it and usually don't get it. I found this one hard to follow and couldn't keep my interest until the end.
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2019
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I have been told I shouldn't review free verse poetry because I don't normally enjoy it and usually don't get it. I found this one hard to follow and couldn't keep my interest until the end.
Comment Written 23-May-2019
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2019
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thank you for the time of day for your review,earl corp! sorry for the late reply. "your so vein" means mood or humor.
your so vein
godlucifer
Comment from TPAC
I guess it would be cruel to think past periods live we didn't have a written love, given is strange fact in uniqueness, pounding statement captured in a loop of words. All stated in my opinion.
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2019
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I guess it would be cruel to think past periods live we didn't have a written love, given is strange fact in uniqueness, pounding statement captured in a loop of words. All stated in my opinion.
Comment Written 22-May-2019
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2019
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thank you for the time of day for your review,tpac! also thank you for sharing your thoughts and opinion. sorry for the late reply. "your so vein" means mood or humor.
your so vein
godlucifer
Comment from Joan E.
I admired your sharing your philosophical thoughts about time and love in this spare form, with no capitals and little punctuation. The artwork you selected established a reflective mood for your poem. Cheers- Joan
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2019
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I admired your sharing your philosophical thoughts about time and love in this spare form, with no capitals and little punctuation. The artwork you selected established a reflective mood for your poem. Cheers- Joan
Comment Written 21-May-2019
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2019
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thank you for the time of day for your review,joan! sorry for the late reply. "your so vein" means mood or humor.
your so vein
godlucifer
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This poem has a philosophical biasness of expression stating that every human action has its written form of appreciation; well said, well done. Thank you for sharing. Write to inspire, change -- DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2019
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This poem has a philosophical biasness of expression stating that every human action has its written form of appreciation; well said, well done. Thank you for sharing. Write to inspire, change -- DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 21-May-2019
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2019
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thank you for the time of day for your review,dr alcreator! sorry for the late reply. "your so vein" means mood or humor.
your so vein
godlucifer
