Comment from A. Willow Bends

Excellent

Very, very nicely done. Great flow. Unique. Creative. I like this very much as well as the visual you chose. "who braid verse to make a crown for her head" O.K. now, that I'd like to plagiarize. Amazing. Ethereal. Lovely.
Great job!
Wendy

 Comment Written 25-May-2019

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reply by the author on 26-May-2019

Thanks, Wendy. Your reviews are always very kind.

Comment from Pearl Edwards

Excellent

This is a delightful romance poem Maria and I love how you've used the writing theme in your descriptions. Once again very creative thinking, loved it,
cheers,
valda

 Comment Written 23-May-2019

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reply by the author on 24-May-2019

Thanks so much for reading. Take care.
(I'm copying and pasting this reply as I have a lot of grading to do this week.)

Comment from June Sargent

Excellent

A beautiful piece that captures the joy of being in love and the pain of being part of two different worlds that keep them apart. This can apply to relationships in so many ways and on so many levels. Very unique and creative. I enjoyed the artwork as well. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 22-May-2019

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reply by the author on 22-May-2019

Thanks so much for reading.

Comment from Joan E.

Excellent

What an emotional artwork to establish the mood for your poem, which seems to describe a fantasy world! I relished your descriptions of "wrapped In silk", "braided verse" and "velvet sun". Cheers- Joan

 Comment Written 21-May-2019

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reply by the author on 22-May-2019

Thanks for reading. xxx

Comment from Ulla

Excellent

Hi Maria Jose. this is such a beautiful poem about two lovers being kept apart. It's wonderfully composed and has such lovely imagery. You are a very talented poetry writer. Ulla xxx

 Comment Written 21-May-2019

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reply by the author on 22-May-2019

Thanks so much. Take care.

Comment from Sugarray77

Excellent

Superb writing, Maria. I always knew you were very good at prose, but you are equally talented with your poet's pen. I really enjoyed reading this one.

Melissa

 Comment Written 20-May-2019

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reply by the author on 21-May-2019

That means a lot coming form you, Melissa. Still, I think I'll stick with prose. Verse is too difficult for me.
Thanks for reading.

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

Maria, This is a very beautiful and well written love poem you have penned about fate keeping the two lovers apart. You used very soft words and lovely imagery. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this. love and blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 20-May-2019

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reply by the author on 21-May-2019

Thanks. xxx

Comment from Y. M. Roger

Exceptional

Oh what a beautiful write of poets and hearts separated by more than the world between them ... great one, Lady Maria --- always enjoy your lovely free verses! :) :) Yvette

 Comment Written 20-May-2019

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reply by the author on 21-May-2019

I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for the yellow star. xxx

Comment from Patty Palmer

Excellent

The poem was easy to read and to understand. Sad when two people love each other but are kept apart as you say she lived in a different land almost like the wrong side of the tracks. What a shame!

 Comment Written 20-May-2019

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reply by the author on 21-May-2019

Thanks for your review, Patricia.

Comment from LG Wolfe

Excellent

Hi Maria,

This is an amazing story of (in my opinion) two passionate writers, adoring each other through love letters. They're kept apart permanently by their different worlds, the darkness and the light. Your free verse is exquisite, as always.

LG

 Comment Written 19-May-2019

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reply by the author on 21-May-2019

Thanks, this means a lot coming from you (a real poet).

reply by LG Wolfe on 21-May-2019

Hah, not really, but I will take it. Thank you!