Comment from Mia Twysted

Excellent

Very true. I have known times when the story is a curse. When it is a punishment, it seems. Then there are other times where the rain falling down is calming and uplifting.

Very well done. Good luck.

 Comment Written 20-May-2019

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reply by the author on 20-May-2019

Thanks much for your read and comments.

Comment from victor 66

Excellent

Your 11 syllable poem entry explores the possibility of nature's disregard for humans. Nature just does what it will and gives no thought to us. It comes and it goes without interest. Best wishes in the contest.

 Comment Written 19-May-2019

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reply by the author on 20-May-2019

Thanks for the read and the comments. My view exactly.

reply by victor 66 on 20-May-2019

You are most welcome.

Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-Nice image and
presentation.
-The syllable count is good.
-I like your topic and
the description of the rain.
-You pose a good question;
too much of anything isn't
always good, but you
have a good answer in the last line.
-Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 19-May-2019

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reply by the author on 20-May-2019

Thanks for the read and the insightful comments. My view exactly.

reply by Pam (respa) on 20-May-2019

You are quite welcome.