lamb's breath
a 3 5 3 poem2 total reviews
Comment from Six-Star Writer
I liked the "clover on lamb's breath" line. Short, but descriptive. I could almost smell spring in the seat next to me, even though I'm in a Starbucks. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 19-May-2019
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I liked the "clover on lamb's breath" line. Short, but descriptive. I could almost smell spring in the seat next to me, even though I'm in a Starbucks. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 19-May-2019
reply by the author on 19-May-2019
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Thanks for your review from Starbucks. I was thinking of koala bears with their little eucalyptus breath, haha. Think spring. Cheers, j
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That works, too.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a sweet and ambient write and a kiss from a spring lamb seems a great way to bring life to a new year or spring and summer. A joyous write and a fine presentation, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 19-May-2019
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This is a sweet and ambient write and a kiss from a spring lamb seems a great way to bring life to a new year or spring and summer. A joyous write and a fine presentation, love Dolly x
Comment Written 19-May-2019
reply by the author on 19-May-2019
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Thanks for the generous review. Few things say spring like sweet little puffs of lamb's clover breath...haha maybe lilacs. Cheers, j
