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Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written poem about your war against the bacteria Staphylococcus which is very hard to beat, I had the same problem a few years ago after surgery, until my leg had to be amputated, only then the doctors and me win the bacteria, with VITAMIN C,D and an immune system booster along with antibiotics seem to win. I may still have it inside me waiting for an outburst but I am quite healthy at the moment.

 Comment Written 07-Jun-2019


reply by the author on 08-Jun-2019
    I?m so sorry you suffered this. The biofilm stick to the prosthesis I?ve made my choice and thank you for the vitamin help. You must be of strong faith.i appreciated your kind review
    Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Cindy Warren
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Yeah, some of those bacteria are scary. I once changed bandages for a lady with an infected bedsore. It was neon green. We tried everything from silver compounds to vinegar. Fortunately she had very little feeling. Hope you find a way to defeat this enemy.
One other little thing; according to a writing class I took, numbers should be spelled out. Dates are OK, but other than that 3 should be three.

 Comment Written 06-Jun-2019


reply by the author on 08-Jun-2019
    Yuk! Thank you for your kind reply and the tip

    Hugs, Trisha
Comment from kahpot
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Excellent and very brave of you to write and share, a very hard time for you, as you say size doesn't matter, the smallest things can be harmful, very well done and my wishes go out to you****kahpot

 Comment Written 06-Jun-2019


reply by the author on 08-Jun-2019
    Thanks for your understanding. Everyone has something to deal with,. I have to hold on with faith. Your review is appreciated
    Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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This sounds awful Trisha, you poor thing! These hip replacements are commonplace these days and I had no idea of such complications, I wish you well, your words are poignant, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 06-Jun-2019


reply by the author on 08-Jun-2019
    Thank you very much, Dolly I appreciated your review
    Hugs,Trisha
Comment from Gypsymooncat
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Goodness it sounds like you're in the wars! No pun intended lol. I'm sorry you're going through this, but keep writing, keep hoping, and I reckon a solution will come to you in a poem one day. I wish you relief from this battle, and say kudos to you for turning out a great piece of poetry!

 Comment Written 06-Jun-2019


reply by the author on 08-Jun-2019
    Thank you so much! I do have hope, faith and research!
    Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Pearl Edwards
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Unfortunately I know what you are going through Trisha. A few years ago my husband had the same problem after heart surgery. He had a lot of time in hospital, months of antibiotics, but he won out in the end, and I hope you do too. I wish you well, thanks for sharing, that's what we are here for to help from afar.
cheers,
valda

 Comment Written 06-Jun-2019


reply by the author on 08-Jun-2019
    Thank you so much! I do have hope, faith, research, and supportive friends here on FS.
    Hugs, Trisha