Cactus Flower
Long-nosed bats pollinate cactus flowers5 total reviews
Comment from Gail Denham
Very nice - glad I wasn't there tho - don't much like bats - guess I don't trust them. My daughter/law tho wants bat houses around their place. She's into animals.
However, back to the poem - very nice
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2019
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Very nice - glad I wasn't there tho - don't much like bats - guess I don't trust them. My daughter/law tho wants bat houses around their place. She's into animals.
However, back to the poem - very nice
Comment Written 23-May-2019
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2019
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Gail, sorry you don't like bats. However you are far from alone. Lol
Again, you humble me with your most generous six star award.
Thank you so much.
Best
John
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
In first two lines, action, generation in Nature is concordantly and beauty observation feeling orderly versed, third line has a satori or 'aha' effect; well said, well done. Write to inspire -- DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2019
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In first two lines, action, generation in Nature is concordantly and beauty observation feeling orderly versed, third line has a satori or 'aha' effect; well said, well done. Write to inspire -- DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 19-May-2019
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2019
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Thank you DR for a great review. So glad you enjoyed.
Best
John
Comment from Kamisah Karim
A good simple poem called a Haiku, aJapanese poem, actually a 17 syllables short poem broken into 5-7-5 syllables form. The first line sets the mood for the rest of the two lines.Description based on sensory organs to increase the imagery brought forth.
You have presented those elements in your poem. Words such as 'moonlit' and 'irradiant' helps the reader to imagine the event talked about in your poem more vividly..Congrates.
Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2019
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A good simple poem called a Haiku, aJapanese poem, actually a 17 syllables short poem broken into 5-7-5 syllables form. The first line sets the mood for the rest of the two lines.Description based on sensory organs to increase the imagery brought forth.
You have presented those elements in your poem. Words such as 'moonlit' and 'irradiant' helps the reader to imagine the event talked about in your poem more vividly..Congrates.
Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 19-May-2019
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2019
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Thank you Kamisah for a great review. So glad you enjoyed.
Best
John
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You are very welcome John.
Comment from Patty Palmer
Short and sweet. I am impressed when someone can take so few words and make them mean so much. I will be looking forward to reading more of your work,
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2019
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Short and sweet. I am impressed when someone can take so few words and make them mean so much. I will be looking forward to reading more of your work,
Comment Written 19-May-2019
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2019
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Thank you Patricia for a great review. So glad you enjoyed.
Best
John
Comment from kahpot
I love the way you have made the poem (words) combine with the artwork, both visually and verbal, very well written and presented, best wishes for your competition****kahpot
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2019
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I love the way you have made the poem (words) combine with the artwork, both visually and verbal, very well written and presented, best wishes for your competition****kahpot
Comment Written 19-May-2019
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2019
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Thank you Kahpot for a great review. So glad you enjoyed.
Best
John
