Feeling Exploited
It's my fate.22 total reviews
Comment from 24chas
This was so funny, Maria. You are the master of the a-has! I really needed a good laugh right now and you came through, my friend. Great job and I can't wait to see the next one.
reply by the author on 18-May-2019
This was so funny, Maria. You are the master of the a-has! I really needed a good laugh right now and you came through, my friend. Great job and I can't wait to see the next one.
Comment Written 17-May-2019
reply by the author on 18-May-2019
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Well, I'm glad this made you laugh.
Thanks for reading. Take care.
Comment from Alex Rosel
I always try and anticipate the coming twist in these short pieces. I wasn't expecting the twist you've got at the culmination of this one. So you caught me unprepared.
Short, sweet, and entertaining. I enjoyed reading it :)
reply by the author on 18-May-2019
I always try and anticipate the coming twist in these short pieces. I wasn't expecting the twist you've got at the culmination of this one. So you caught me unprepared.
Short, sweet, and entertaining. I enjoyed reading it :)
Comment Written 17-May-2019
reply by the author on 18-May-2019
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Thanks, Alex.
Comment from Sally Law
In your zone, I see. I enjoy these short flash dictions, too. I just recently learned that the only count is a word processor on your computer for accuracy. The word processor in edit format for FanStory is inaccurate. I adjusted all my recent entries. I count 52 and ready for the contest.
Always my best,
Sal xo
reply by the author on 18-May-2019
In your zone, I see. I enjoy these short flash dictions, too. I just recently learned that the only count is a word processor on your computer for accuracy. The word processor in edit format for FanStory is inaccurate. I adjusted all my recent entries. I count 52 and ready for the contest.
Always my best,
Sal xo
Comment Written 17-May-2019
reply by the author on 18-May-2019
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Thanks, Sally. I always use my word processor to count the number of words.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
He he he, this made me smile Maria, those handbags of ours certainly manage to work hard for us don't they! You are forever inventive with your writes, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 18-May-2019
He he he, this made me smile Maria, those handbags of ours certainly manage to work hard for us don't they! You are forever inventive with your writes, love Dolly x
Comment Written 17-May-2019
reply by the author on 18-May-2019
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I'm glad I made you smile. Thanks for your review.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Well, now there's a 'surprise' ending no one saw coming ... how very original, Lady Maria!! :) ;) A very entertaining Dribble offering! ;) Good luck in the contest! ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 18-May-2019
Well, now there's a 'surprise' ending no one saw coming ... how very original, Lady Maria!! :) ;) A very entertaining Dribble offering! ;) Good luck in the contest! ;) Yvette
Comment Written 17-May-2019
reply by the author on 18-May-2019
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Thanks, Yvette. xxx
Comment from Debra White
Hi Maria :)
So glad I'm not a handbag - although I do always seem to be the one carrying everyone else's stuff around!
This was a cute read. The picture is funny. The handbag is a grump!
Best wishes as always, Debra :) x
reply by the author on 18-May-2019
Hi Maria :)
So glad I'm not a handbag - although I do always seem to be the one carrying everyone else's stuff around!
This was a cute read. The picture is funny. The handbag is a grump!
Best wishes as always, Debra :) x
Comment Written 17-May-2019
reply by the author on 18-May-2019
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Thanks, Debra. xxx
Comment from aryr
Good luck in the contest Maria, I liked the way you plotted out this short story. No one suspected that it was a handbag until the last sentence. A great job, well done.
reply by the author on 18-May-2019
Good luck in the contest Maria, I liked the way you plotted out this short story. No one suspected that it was a handbag until the last sentence. A great job, well done.
Comment Written 17-May-2019
reply by the author on 18-May-2019
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Thanks so much, Aryr.
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You are so welcome
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
There you go again , I knew there would be a twist and believe me, I read the first part and tried to guess what the end was before I got to it, this was another I did not see comeing. Very well told
reply by the author on 18-May-2019
There you go again , I knew there would be a twist and believe me, I read the first part and tried to guess what the end was before I got to it, this was another I did not see comeing. Very well told
Comment Written 17-May-2019
reply by the author on 18-May-2019
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Thanks so much for reading, Barb.
Comment from royowen
Another most imaginative short work, Maria, you're really getting a handle on this method of writing, of course a sentient handbag, would indeed protest with being "used" well done, good luck, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 18-May-2019
Another most imaginative short work, Maria, you're really getting a handle on this method of writing, of course a sentient handbag, would indeed protest with being "used" well done, good luck, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 17-May-2019
reply by the author on 18-May-2019
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Thanks for reading, Roy. Have a lovely day.
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You too.
Comment from Rmocruz
I find this flash fiction to be lighthearted and clever.
A cute art-work selection as well, to enhance.
"beckoned call"---Perhaps?
Best wishes with this worthy contest entry!
reply by the author on 18-May-2019
I find this flash fiction to be lighthearted and clever.
A cute art-work selection as well, to enhance.
"beckoned call"---Perhaps?
Best wishes with this worthy contest entry!
Comment Written 17-May-2019
reply by the author on 18-May-2019
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No, the correct expression is beck and call.
Thanks so much for reading. Have a nice day.
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You're welcome, thanks for the info.