The Old Clock
No longer wanted by once proud family3 total reviews
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
This is an enjoyable poem in that the clock is an allegory for us. We are at some point in our life the pride and joy of someone and we are well put together as we tick along the road of life. But our parts do wear and slowly we become as the clock, rather useless. I'm taking a guess that that was your aim, right.
reply by the author on 18-May-2019
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This is an enjoyable poem in that the clock is an allegory for us. We are at some point in our life the pride and joy of someone and we are well put together as we tick along the road of life. But our parts do wear and slowly we become as the clock, rather useless. I'm taking a guess that that was your aim, right.
Comment Written 18-May-2019
reply by the author on 18-May-2019
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You got it. Some did not. Thanks for the read and the comments. Much appreciated.
Comment from beizanten
A good first stanza. A very good second stanza. A beautifully written third paragraph. You display how time effect even non-living object beautifully and the angst mood flow well.
reply by the author on 17-May-2019
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A good first stanza. A very good second stanza. A beautifully written third paragraph. You display how time effect even non-living object beautifully and the angst mood flow well.
Comment Written 17-May-2019
reply by the author on 17-May-2019
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Thank you so much for your read and review.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
No escape, law of Nature is incessant, natural and beyond anyone's control; the old clock once was proud family is no longer wanted today; well said, well done. Thank you for sharing -- DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 17-May-2019
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No escape, law of Nature is incessant, natural and beyond anyone's control; the old clock once was proud family is no longer wanted today; well said, well done. Thank you for sharing -- DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 17-May-2019
reply by the author on 17-May-2019
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Thank you for your read and review. It is not only old clocks that may be cast away.
