She Said - He... didn't
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Comment from Pam (respa)
-Good image and
nice formatting of your poem.
-Good choice of antonyms.
-She is definitely ticked off
at Sam, and let's him know it!
-I don't think Sam
heard her, though:)
-The final antonym
is a good conclusion
to this one sided conversation.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 16-May-2019
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-Good image and
nice formatting of your poem.
-Good choice of antonyms.
-She is definitely ticked off
at Sam, and let's him know it!
-I don't think Sam
heard her, though:)
-The final antonym
is a good conclusion
to this one sided conversation.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 16-May-2019
reply by the author on 16-May-2019
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wow, Pam, thanks! you said lots more than my entry!
much appreciated.
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You are very welcome, pome lover. It doesn't matter how many words are written if they are creative and interesting! I liked your poem.
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Thanks again. I'm delighted that you did,
pome
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You are very welcome.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Silence is often an admission of guilt or shame at something we have done and you have captured this in your few words here, I wish you luck with the contest, you brought this unique scene to my eyes, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 16-May-2019
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Silence is often an admission of guilt or shame at something we have done and you have captured this in your few words here, I wish you luck with the contest, you brought this unique scene to my eyes, love Dolly x
Comment Written 16-May-2019
reply by the author on 16-May-2019
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true, but in this case, she is a nag and his defense is silence. At least that was my intent. Since there could only be a total of 4 lines, and the two opposite words had to stand alone, I had to delete a lot of her harangue. So I guess that didn't come across. But I thank you for your comments and good wishes!
