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Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written poem about the way nature talks to us. We see the beauty all around us and we know the creator of it all is nearby watching over us day and night.

 Comment Written 04-Jun-2019


reply by the author on 08-Jun-2019
    I?m glad you enjoyed reading my poem. Thank you for your supportive review
    Hugs, Trisha
Comment from fm wright
Exceptional
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A beautifully written poem that expresses wonderfully how nature communicates with us. It flows very rhythmically in word and thought. It is truly well rendered!

 Comment Written 04-Jun-2019


reply by the author on 08-Jun-2019
    I?m glad you enjoyed reading my poem. Thank you for your supportive review and six stars
    Hugs, Trisha
reply by fm wright on 08-Jun-2019
    You are so welcome. I truly did enjoy reading it!
Comment from Patty Palmer
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A very nice look at nature and all it's assets. The sun, the moon with their lighting. Which then affects the trees and plants. Animals play during the day while others venture out
during the dark of night to feed. It all paints a pretty picture.

 Comment Written 04-Jun-2019


reply by the author on 08-Jun-2019
    I?m glad you enjoyed reading my poem. Thank you for your supportive review
    Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Bill Pinder
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Excellent writing that conveys a love for God and nature with all its uniqueness and beauty. Thanks for sharing this creative expression that is a reminder to slow down and focus on the good thing is that we can be grateful for.
Bill

 Comment Written 04-Jun-2019


reply by the author on 08-Jun-2019
    I?m glad you enjoyed reading my poem. Thank you for your supportive review
    Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Y. M. Roger
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Wow -- this format is really kinda cool, Trisha, and I love the way you've employed it to encompass nature's beauty and tie it back ultimately to the creator of it all... great job! ;) ;) Thanx for sharing! :) Yvette

 Comment Written 03-Jun-2019


reply by the author on 08-Jun-2019
    What can I say, but thanks a bunch for your kind review?
    Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Teri7
Exceptional
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This is a very well written poem - Nature Talks. You used great descriptive words and very lovely art work you choses. I like the rhyme you had on here. Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 03-Jun-2019


reply by the author on 11-Jun-2019
    I?m delighted you enjoyed Nature Talks! I value your reviews , thank you.
    Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Badger_29
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Dear Writer, I enjoyed this thoroughly as a start to my day. I like how you drink together the sights the sounds and smells and you included the celestial sky.

Everyday nature talks without words
But communicates by sights and sound
We're woken up by the songs of the birds

This was my favorite opening line. I also like how you utilize rhyme slant rhyme and then some places were there was no run it made it complete made it easier to read. Nice flow structure good spacing good strong adjectives read this a pleasure to read.

Blessings to you,

Brother Badger cull

Darren

 Comment Written 03-Jun-2019


reply by the author on 03-Jun-2019
    Thank you Bb, I?m always glad to hear from you. Your expressive review made my evening! Thank you so much
    Hugs, writer Trisha