Day Poetry Saving Souls
we should pray for one another always3 total reviews
Comment from djsaxon
Mi piace la tua penna, amico mio. Trust in it. You always deliver a faithful message. Where are you located in Italia? Maybe not? The last line of this poem is very powerful. DJ
reply by the author on 15-May-2019
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Mi piace la tua penna, amico mio. Trust in it. You always deliver a faithful message. Where are you located in Italia? Maybe not? The last line of this poem is very powerful. DJ
Comment Written 15-May-2019
reply by the author on 15-May-2019
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DJ thank you for review. giovanni
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written poem that is full of very good descriptive words that are very deep and interesting. And I like where you stated we should pray for one another always! That is so very true. Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 15-May-2019
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This is a very well written poem that is full of very good descriptive words that are very deep and interesting. And I like where you stated we should pray for one another always! That is so very true. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 15-May-2019
reply by the author on 15-May-2019
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Teri7 thank you for your review. giovanni
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I thought that I should let you know that I wrote this because of my poem "Caught up in the Milieu", it's been there since 5/12/2019 but no one wishes to review it & I wondered why & this poem came out if that pondering. Just a tid-bit of introspective info! giovanni
Comment from Katelynn Barnett
I love the idea of this poem. It's smart and creative. I especially love the fist stanza. I think the last stanza loses a bit of your rhythm. So I might rethink the middle two lines of that stanza. And I don't like the word puss in the poem,. But that may just be my personal dislike for that word. Ha.. I really like it. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 15-May-2019
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I love the idea of this poem. It's smart and creative. I especially love the fist stanza. I think the last stanza loses a bit of your rhythm. So I might rethink the middle two lines of that stanza. And I don't like the word puss in the poem,. But that may just be my personal dislike for that word. Ha.. I really like it. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 15-May-2019
reply by the author on 15-May-2019
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Katelynn thank you for your review. giovanni I see what you mean because of those 2 middle lines in the last stanza, I thought & felt the same thing about them. I believe that's because of no punctuation. I seem to be freerer because of it. If you re-read with 3 (...) after protest this......... a long pause. that might help.
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I thought that I should let you know that I wrote this because of my poem "Caught up in the Milieu", it's been there since 5/12/2019 but no one wishes to review it & I wondered why & this poem came out if that pondering. Just a tid-bit of introspective info! giovanni
