Reviews from

Time Management

Overachievers R Us!

30 total reviews 
Comment from Irish Rain
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

Ha ha...love it!
I don't know if unconscious
is the opposite of busy...it sounds
right...but it sure describes my
life!
Good luck!
Blessings...

 Comment Written 15-May-2019


reply by the author on 16-May-2019
    Another reviewer said that, too! Haha. Hopefully the contest committee won't DQ me on those grounds, Irish Rain!
reply by Irish Rain on 16-May-2019
    I wouldn't think so, but...I'm not them so...but good luck!!
Comment from Beri Bee
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

This is great! And so relatable! Overachievers are us! Or in this case... Overachievers Anonymous! My name is Beri, and I'm an overachiever! Hi Beri!

 Comment Written 15-May-2019


reply by the author on 15-May-2019
    Hahahaha. You're right!! Thanks for the hilarious review!
Comment from Ja Majal
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

The picture is a spider I believe, but the poem made me think of a busy ant working all day long! What a hectic schedule you have going on there(lol).
No wonder you clocked out ! :) cool entry

 Comment Written 15-May-2019


reply by the author on 15-May-2019
    As in ANTonym? (sorry; I couldn't resist.) Love the review. Thank you.
Comment from LisaMay
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

Such a clever entry in the antonym contest. (not an 'ant' but a spider! haha)
Your detailing of activities, taking us from busy to unconscious is skilfully done.

 Comment Written 15-May-2019


reply by the author on 15-May-2019
    Thank you, LisaMay!
Comment from royowen
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

Well done, this is an excellent entry in this antonym poetry contest, yes indeed, two separate live activities, one very active, the other completely inactive, well done, good luck, blessings, Roy

 Comment Written 15-May-2019


reply by the author on 15-May-2019
    I appreciate your encouragement!
Comment from Hitcher
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

Trying to juggle life around ones passion and managing to fit everything else in is no easy task that is for sure friend. I enjoyed your creative take on it. Good luck!

 Comment Written 15-May-2019


reply by the author on 15-May-2019
    Very true, Hitcher. Thanks for the review. I appreciate it very much.
Comment from 24chas
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

I looked askance at this one when I first read it. Then I chortled when I read it the second time. It was terrific. Love the antonyms you used and I was exhausted after the second and third lines. Whew. You deserve the win.

 Comment Written 15-May-2019


reply by the author on 15-May-2019
    Thank you, 24chas. I hope you're right!
Comment from Boogienights
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

After doing all that you listed in your poem, I would be unconscious too! I love this funny contest entry because it's such a true premise. Best of luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 15-May-2019


reply by the author on 15-May-2019
    I appreciate this, Boogienights!! Thank you!
Comment from TPAC
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

The bottom line to our given efforts, unconscious, tried of those daily endeavors we to do struggling at these work tasks, put interests to yield win. All stated in my opinion of this write.

 Comment Written 15-May-2019


reply by the author on 15-May-2019
    Yes, thank you, TPAC.
Comment from Debra White
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

Hello :)
Wow - this sounds like me!
I enjoyed your entry for the prompt which complies with the requirements.
Good luck in the voting booth!
Best wishes, Debra :)

 Comment Written 15-May-2019


reply by the author on 15-May-2019
    Thank you very much! I appreciate your review!