Haiku and Senryu Suites
Viewing comments for Chapter 28 "Do You Mind?"Book of Haiku, Senryu & Lanturne Suites
4 total reviews
Comment from Gail Denham
Good job - you zeroed in on the mind - on forgetting what we've learned or been told. That's for sure. In conversation with my husband, I often just use the first word that comes to mind to describe something. It works for me. But the other day I said "I've been researching on Amazon to find a piano with a viewfinder" - course I meant camera. Oh well.
reply by the author on 17-May-2019
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Good job - you zeroed in on the mind - on forgetting what we've learned or been told. That's for sure. In conversation with my husband, I often just use the first word that comes to mind to describe something. It works for me. But the other day I said "I've been researching on Amazon to find a piano with a viewfinder" - course I meant camera. Oh well.
Comment Written 15-May-2019
reply by the author on 17-May-2019
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Thanks Gail, I really appreciate your kind words and reveal and I appreciate you comparing it to conversations you have with your husband this sheds light on and how it's coming across to the readers.
Blessings,
Brother Badger cull
Darren
Comment from Liz O'Neill
OMG Ps 139 is my favorite Psalm. These are fine examples of Haiku. This is cleverly done. It's almost like it is written code. The message is the same but very revolutionized. The computers or bot rule. lol I do like the way you write.
reply by the author on 17-May-2019
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OMG Ps 139 is my favorite Psalm. These are fine examples of Haiku. This is cleverly done. It's almost like it is written code. The message is the same but very revolutionized. The computers or bot rule. lol I do like the way you write.
Comment Written 15-May-2019
reply by the author on 17-May-2019
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Thank you so much Liz I appreciate your warm review and kind comments. There's a great vein and fellowship that runs through here, and I'm so happy I picked a Psalm that you are not only familiar with, but one of your favorites.
Blessings,
Brother Badger cull
Darren
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
He he he, you made me smile here as we sometimes are too busy to say thanks! But you have vowed to change your ways here, a fun write . . . . love Dolly x
reply by the author on 14-May-2019
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He he he, you made me smile here as we sometimes are too busy to say thanks! But you have vowed to change your ways here, a fun write . . . . love Dolly x
Comment Written 14-May-2019
reply by the author on 14-May-2019
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Thank you very much Dolly, I appreciate your thoughtful comments and thorough reviews. I'm glad I made you smile, as I was stabbing at kind of twisted humor at the end there. I'm so glad that you caught it. Oh, but that we woe to correct our shortcomings! I usually experience the winds of change in Autumn . . . . .
Blessings,
Brother Badger cull
Darren
Comment from Patty Palmer
Nice poem! The way to learning anything is by repetition. The more you repeat, the more quicker you learn, I can imagine with all the pathways in our brains how much do we know that we don't?
reply by the author on 13-May-2019
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Nice poem! The way to learning anything is by repetition. The more you repeat, the more quicker you learn, I can imagine with all the pathways in our brains how much do we know that we don't?
Comment Written 13-May-2019
reply by the author on 13-May-2019
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Following my humor and train of thought, you gave me a chuckle. I really appreciate this thoughtful and complete review.
(! Remembered!)
Blessings,
Brother Badger cull
Darren
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You're welcome for the review! You made me :use my head" to figure it out though.
