Hanging Out
Minute poetry29 total reviews
Comment from Kathleen Washnis
Great picture to go with your creative poetic rhyme! You make me laugh, always have great pics to go with your great poems. Always a pleasure to read.
reply by the author on 21-May-2019
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Great picture to go with your creative poetic rhyme! You make me laugh, always have great pics to go with your great poems. Always a pleasure to read.
Comment Written 20-May-2019
reply by the author on 21-May-2019
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Thanks Kathleen. This was a fun one to write. It made me laugh too. LOL
Melissa
Comment from Joan E.
The picture you selected gives new meaning to the wind-blown look and "Hanging Out"! Your speaking in the first person in the dog's voice was very effective along with your rhymed couplets. Smiles- Joan
reply by the author on 16-May-2019
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The picture you selected gives new meaning to the wind-blown look and "Hanging Out"! Your speaking in the first person in the dog's voice was very effective along with your rhymed couplets. Smiles- Joan
Comment Written 16-May-2019
reply by the author on 16-May-2019
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Thank you so much, Joan!!
Melissa
Comment from Aussie
Portrait of Trump in his youth? Hee, Hee. Loved it. Our dogs, especially working dogs traveling on tray-back trucks, by law must be constrained. i have seen a dog slide off the back straight onto the roadway. We also have seat belts that clip into ordinary adult belts in the back seat. Wonderful photo of Buddy, guess he is your driver by now? Our motorbike riders sometimes carry small dogs on their handlebars, all dressed up like mini-bikers.
reply by the author on 16-May-2019
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Portrait of Trump in his youth? Hee, Hee. Loved it. Our dogs, especially working dogs traveling on tray-back trucks, by law must be constrained. i have seen a dog slide off the back straight onto the roadway. We also have seat belts that clip into ordinary adult belts in the back seat. Wonderful photo of Buddy, guess he is your driver by now? Our motorbike riders sometimes carry small dogs on their handlebars, all dressed up like mini-bikers.
Comment Written 16-May-2019
reply by the author on 16-May-2019
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How fun to have such an experience with dogs. I really had fun pulling this verse together. Thanks so much.
Melissa
Comment from BeasPeas
Well, he certainly looks to be beside himself with happiness. My doggy prefers to stay home, but she is not the norm. Most dogs love car rides. I enjoyed reading this cute Minute poem of a happy pup. Marilyn
reply by the author on 15-May-2019
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Well, he certainly looks to be beside himself with happiness. My doggy prefers to stay home, but she is not the norm. Most dogs love car rides. I enjoyed reading this cute Minute poem of a happy pup. Marilyn
Comment Written 15-May-2019
reply by the author on 15-May-2019
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Thank you so much, Marilyn!! This I was fun to write and I loved that photo... that is one happy dog. Haha.
Melissa
Comment from l.raven
HI Melissa, LOL...my dog was the only dog
I ever knew that got sick riding in the car...
he was like that from the first day we got him...
but I know dogs do love riding in cars...and having the wind blow in there faces...I love your minute poem my sweet friend...and loveeeee this picture sweet girl...very well written...love you...Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 15-May-2019
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HI Melissa, LOL...my dog was the only dog
I ever knew that got sick riding in the car...
he was like that from the first day we got him...
but I know dogs do love riding in cars...and having the wind blow in there faces...I love your minute poem my sweet friend...and loveeeee this picture sweet girl...very well written...love you...Linda xxoo
Comment Written 15-May-2019
reply by the author on 15-May-2019
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Thanks so much, Linda!!! I am so glad you liked it and sent me your comments.
Melissa
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you are so welcome sweet girl...love you...xxoo
Comment from dragonpoet
This dog is both cute and a little scary looking. Almost looks like a little fox looking for food. Although it is what dogs seem to like. I like the view from the dog's side. On the dark side, I've often wondered if anyone has lost a dog because it jump out the open window.
Keep writing
Joan
reply by the author on 15-May-2019
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This dog is both cute and a little scary looking. Almost looks like a little fox looking for food. Although it is what dogs seem to like. I like the view from the dog's side. On the dark side, I've often wondered if anyone has lost a dog because it jump out the open window.
Keep writing
Joan
Comment Written 15-May-2019
reply by the author on 15-May-2019
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That is a great point, Joan. I have heard that dogs like to ride while looking out of the window, but let?s hope they don?t jump out. Thanks for the great review.
Melissa
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They do like sitting by an open window. I owned a big dog and only put down th window so her head could fit out.
You're welcome
Joan
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
What a fun minute poem, Melissa. I enjoyed reading it. The picture is super. What a cutie. Good job with the style of the minute poem. Your lines read well with good meter. this could have been a contest entry. Thanks for sharing. Jan
reply by the author on 15-May-2019
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What a fun minute poem, Melissa. I enjoyed reading it. The picture is super. What a cutie. Good job with the style of the minute poem. Your lines read well with good meter. this could have been a contest entry. Thanks for sharing. Jan
Comment Written 15-May-2019
reply by the author on 15-May-2019
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Thanks so much, Jan. This one was a fun one to pull together.
Melissa
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written fun Minute poem about Buddy haning out the window, feeling the wind in his hair, the girls looking at him, he is smiling wide, he is happy to take a ride.
reply by the author on 14-May-2019
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A very well-written fun Minute poem about Buddy haning out the window, feeling the wind in his hair, the girls looking at him, he is smiling wide, he is happy to take a ride.
Comment Written 14-May-2019
reply by the author on 14-May-2019
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Thank you, Sandra, for the great review!
Melissa
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Thank you, Sandra, for the great review!
Melissa
Comment from Loren .
How can one not love that face and identify with the thoughts going through that dog's mind? Yes, the fast, open space, is truly shown in this puppy's happy place. And, expressed so well in your poem as well :) Loren
reply by the author on 14-May-2019
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How can one not love that face and identify with the thoughts going through that dog's mind? Yes, the fast, open space, is truly shown in this puppy's happy place. And, expressed so well in your poem as well :) Loren
Comment Written 14-May-2019
reply by the author on 14-May-2019
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Thanks so much, Loren!!
Melissa
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Thanks so much, Loren!!
Melissa
Comment from Irish Rain
Isn't this happy pooch just so
very precious!!
I love this minute poem Miss Melissa,
it's a wonderful way to start the week!
Happy puppies for everyone!!
Blessings...
reply by the author on 14-May-2019
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Isn't this happy pooch just so
very precious!!
I love this minute poem Miss Melissa,
it's a wonderful way to start the week!
Happy puppies for everyone!!
Blessings...
Comment Written 14-May-2019
reply by the author on 14-May-2019
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Thanks, Judy... I really enjoyed pulling this one together. Thanks for the lovely review.
Melissa
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You're welcome!!
