Land That I Love
5-7-5 Nature Contest32 total reviews
Comment from Heather Knight
But do we listen? We have such a wonderful planet and we are destroying it little by little.
Thanks for sharing your lovely poem.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 14-May-2019
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But do we listen? We have such a wonderful planet and we are destroying it little by little.
Thanks for sharing your lovely poem.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 14-May-2019
reply by the author on 14-May-2019
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Thanks, Maria!
Comment from LIJ Red
Saw it down, bulldoze the hill, pave the meadow, we cannot get filthy rich being benevolent stewards-or can we? Looks like an excellent nature five seven five to me.
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Saw it down, bulldoze the hill, pave the meadow, we cannot get filthy rich being benevolent stewards-or can we? Looks like an excellent nature five seven five to me.
Comment Written 14-May-2019
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"And put up a parking lot." Thanks, Red.
Comment from Rmocruz
You have captured my sentiment's exactly!
This testament to protecting and preserving precious nature,
cannot be overstated. The pristine photo-art well complements.
Great job overall!
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You have captured my sentiment's exactly!
This testament to protecting and preserving precious nature,
cannot be overstated. The pristine photo-art well complements.
Great job overall!
Comment Written 13-May-2019
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Thank you.
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You're welcome.
Comment from evesayshi
In my opinion, a beautiful write, gentle, yet dynamic in its earnest message of regard for the earth - fully compliant with the prompt - best of luck in the contest...
reply by the author on 13-May-2019
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In my opinion, a beautiful write, gentle, yet dynamic in its earnest message of regard for the earth - fully compliant with the prompt - best of luck in the contest...
Comment Written 13-May-2019
reply by the author on 13-May-2019
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Thank you, Eve.
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You are very welcome...Eve
Comment from Gail Denham
Very good - truly a nature poem and the count of the poem is correct. Well done. Loving all things that the earth (God) gives us to enjoy. We just spent a few days at our beaches - and hit perfect weather - what a treat.
reply by the author on 13-May-2019
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Very good - truly a nature poem and the count of the poem is correct. Well done. Loving all things that the earth (God) gives us to enjoy. We just spent a few days at our beaches - and hit perfect weather - what a treat.
Comment Written 13-May-2019
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Life is a beach! Thanks, Gail.
Comment from Ian Traynor
Nice, directly to the point of what you wanted to say in the limited space provided. I especially liked the use of benevolent stewardship. Two words with seven syllables.
reply by the author on 13-May-2019
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Nice, directly to the point of what you wanted to say in the limited space provided. I especially liked the use of benevolent stewardship. Two words with seven syllables.
Comment Written 13-May-2019
reply by the author on 13-May-2019
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Thanks, Ian!
Comment from victor 66
I don't have much confidence in mankind's stewardship of this planet. I think all we've done, has just been token gestures. I believe that eventually that we will make the environment unbearable for humans who quite probably will become extinct. After ten million years, the earth will have no memory of man. Perhaps, I'm just having a bad day. I do appreciate your optimism. Best wishes.
reply by the author on 13-May-2019
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I don't have much confidence in mankind's stewardship of this planet. I think all we've done, has just been token gestures. I believe that eventually that we will make the environment unbearable for humans who quite probably will become extinct. After ten million years, the earth will have no memory of man. Perhaps, I'm just having a bad day. I do appreciate your optimism. Best wishes.
Comment Written 13-May-2019
reply by the author on 13-May-2019
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Thanks, Victor. While I didn't actually express any optimism, I am not as pessimistic as you. Man will continue to do irreparable damage, though I think we'll still manage to survive for eons, albeit in sub-optimal conditions.
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I'm of the mind, that I hope for the best but expect the worst. I hope you're right. Not so much for us, but for the generation yet to come.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Beautiful image and
nice presentation.
-The syllable count is
good, and effective use
of one continuous thought.
-I like the personification
of nature, and the
message in your poem.
-The second line is
a good image, and
shows that is what
nature asks of us.
-A very good entry;
good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 13-May-2019
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-Beautiful image and
nice presentation.
-The syllable count is
good, and effective use
of one continuous thought.
-I like the personification
of nature, and the
message in your poem.
-The second line is
a good image, and
shows that is what
nature asks of us.
-A very good entry;
good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 13-May-2019
reply by the author on 13-May-2019
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Ha, you must have been reading this just as I was your Mother's Day poem! Thanks, Pam!
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That is what you call a big coincidence! You are welcome for the review. I really liked your poem!!
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
You love this land for wonderful landscape, beautiful and congenial environment on the land around; well said, well done. Write to inspire, readable for years -- DR ALCREATOR
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You love this land for wonderful landscape, beautiful and congenial environment on the land around; well said, well done. Write to inspire, readable for years -- DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 13-May-2019
reply by the author on 13-May-2019
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Thanks, Doc.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 5-7-5 about the land that is loved and the beauty she has is all we ask for. The picture is an excellend choice to show the beautiful landscape.
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A very well-written 5-7-5 about the land that is loved and the beauty she has is all we ask for. The picture is an excellend choice to show the beautiful landscape.
Comment Written 13-May-2019
reply by the author on 13-May-2019
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Thanks, Sandra.
