Your Warm Stethoscope
10-word poem (also 5-7-5)14 total reviews
Comment from Sandra Elizabeth Williams
I love this, Contestant. Love both the message being sent and words of your poem, seeing they are only 10, saying do much and also forming a 5-7-5. Very creative.
Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 11-May-2019
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I love this, Contestant. Love both the message being sent and words of your poem, seeing they are only 10, saying do much and also forming a 5-7-5. Very creative.
Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 11-May-2019
reply by the author on 11-May-2019
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Thank you! Not a lot of deep thinking - just fun.
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Great! You are most welcome!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This sounds like a naughty game of passionate fun and I wish you luck with the contest, you made me smile here, inventive and eye-catching presentation, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 11-May-2019
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This sounds like a naughty game of passionate fun and I wish you luck with the contest, you made me smile here, inventive and eye-catching presentation, love Dolly x
Comment Written 11-May-2019
reply by the author on 11-May-2019
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Thanks Dolly. Going for fun rather than deep and meaningful.
Comment from zlp22
Very good poem with great picture. A poem with so little words is hard to make interesting. Your poem told a good story. Good luck in the contest. Red is the perfect color.
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reply by the author on 11-May-2019
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Very good poem with great picture. A poem with so little words is hard to make interesting. Your poem told a good story. Good luck in the contest. Red is the perfect color.
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Comment Written 11-May-2019
reply by the author on 11-May-2019
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I like red too, my favourite colour. Thanks for your review and good wishes.
Comment from Debra White
Hi :)
You met the contest requirements - 10 words present and correct!
I like the playful tone of your poem. Fun and well presented.
Good luck in the voting booth.
Best wishes, Debra :)
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reply by the author on 11-May-2019
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Hi :)
You met the contest requirements - 10 words present and correct!
I like the playful tone of your poem. Fun and well presented.
Good luck in the voting booth.
Best wishes, Debra :)
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Comment Written 11-May-2019
reply by the author on 11-May-2019
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Not a lot of deep meaning in this one... in fact, NONE!
Thanks for reviewing it.
