Back to the Employee Chamber
unable to take it out on themselves2 total reviews
Comment from djsaxon
I have seen too many of these power-hungry people in my working life. Not so humorous most of them. Maybe tweak the dialogue punctuation.
"Am I losing my mind with you?" I say, as I try again
to explain this for the gazillionth time. "Well actually, yes."
Strong and well-considered write. Cheers - DJ
reply by the author on 10-May-2019
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I have seen too many of these power-hungry people in my working life. Not so humorous most of them. Maybe tweak the dialogue punctuation.
"Am I losing my mind with you?" I say, as I try again
to explain this for the gazillionth time. "Well actually, yes."
Strong and well-considered write. Cheers - DJ
Comment Written 10-May-2019
reply by the author on 10-May-2019
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Djsaxon thank you for your review & the corrections. I appreciate it dialogue is not a strong point for me. Never did learn English correctly. A very confusing language in my estimation. I am always in awe when I write. Believe me! Thank you once again. giovanni
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Giovanni. Fidati di me. you are correct. English is a ridiculous language. I have 'fanned' you. I want to read more of your work - DJ
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ok, t/u giovanni
Comment from Raul1
I like how you written about the chamber employee. There is a lot going on in this poem. It is like a story. Thanks for sharing! I like this poem. No grammatical errors.
reply by the author on 10-May-2019
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I like how you written about the chamber employee. There is a lot going on in this poem. It is like a story. Thanks for sharing! I like this poem. No grammatical errors.
Comment Written 10-May-2019
reply by the author on 10-May-2019
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Thank you Raul 1 for your review. giovanni
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You're welcome.
