War Debris
Poem 2/5/23 total reviews
Comment from C. Gale Burnett
This is an exceptional and well thought out 2-6-2 poem, accompanied by artwork so perfect it seemed to be made just for your poem. The poem has a deep message, and I like and appreciate that.
Very best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 16-May-2019
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This is an exceptional and well thought out 2-6-2 poem, accompanied by artwork so perfect it seemed to be made just for your poem. The poem has a deep message, and I like and appreciate that.
Very best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 12-May-2019
reply by the author on 16-May-2019
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A most encouraging review - thanks for sharing those sentiments zanya
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
You have expressed a Very insightful perception of the results of war in a succinct three lines. It is hard to tell a story in 3 lines of text, but you have succeeded.
reply by the author on 16-May-2019
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You have expressed a Very insightful perception of the results of war in a succinct three lines. It is hard to tell a story in 3 lines of text, but you have succeeded.
Comment Written 10-May-2019
reply by the author on 16-May-2019
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Thanks for a most encouraging review zanya
Comment from Raul1
You do strike a point there. I think in order to have peace we need to win wars against people who wants to take it away from us. I like this poem! Well said.
reply by the author on 16-May-2019
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You do strike a point there. I think in order to have peace we need to win wars against people who wants to take it away from us. I like this poem! Well said.
Comment Written 10-May-2019
reply by the author on 16-May-2019
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Yes indeed war is such a destructive force- thanks for sharing zanya
