Viewing comments for Chapter 37 "Gemini"
6 total reviews
Comment from BeasPeas
One that I missed. This is great. Written in rhyming couplets it tells about you as a Gemini. Illustration is gorgeous. Much luck in the contest with this worthy entry. Marilyn
reply by the author on 19-May-2019
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One that I missed. This is great. Written in rhyming couplets it tells about you as a Gemini. Illustration is gorgeous. Much luck in the contest with this worthy entry. Marilyn
Comment Written 19-May-2019
reply by the author on 19-May-2019
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Thanks! It was a last minute minute entry which got last place. It must have been my twin who wrote it - she?s the ditzy one!
I appreciate your complimentary review - I?ll tell her and she?ll be delighted LOL
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Great image and
nice presentation.
-I like your poem-
the rhyme and meter
are very good and create
a smooth flow to the poem.
-You describe yourself
with good imagery and
add humor, too, as
in the last two couplets!
-Good opening lines, too.
-I enjoyed your poem; good
luck in the contest.
-You have a typo: ftwo
reply by the author on 12-May-2019
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-Great image and
nice presentation.
-I like your poem-
the rhyme and meter
are very good and create
a smooth flow to the poem.
-You describe yourself
with good imagery and
add humor, too, as
in the last two couplets!
-Good opening lines, too.
-I enjoyed your poem; good
luck in the contest.
-You have a typo: ftwo
Comment Written 12-May-2019
reply by the author on 12-May-2019
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Thanks for your supportive review
Hugs, Trisha
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You are very welcome, Trisha. I didn't know it was you at the time. That was a gorgeous image!
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written thought-provoking poem. The Gemini is a very busy person, he have two of himself to answer all the time, the one wants to play while the others wants to work. At the end of the day they'd done it all.
reply by the author on 12-May-2019
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A very well-written thought-provoking poem. The Gemini is a very busy person, he have two of himself to answer all the time, the one wants to play while the others wants to work. At the end of the day they'd done it all.
Comment Written 12-May-2019
reply by the author on 12-May-2019
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Thanks for your supportive review
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from LisaMay
You sound like a tall, well balanced person with a good grip on the earth. Big feet are useful. You have good qualities: wise, caring, poetic and humorous. I won't hold procrastination against you, I am late with everything too.
reply by the author on 12-May-2019
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You sound like a tall, well balanced person with a good grip on the earth. Big feet are useful. You have good qualities: wise, caring, poetic and humorous. I won't hold procrastination against you, I am late with everything too.
Comment Written 12-May-2019
reply by the author on 12-May-2019
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Thanks for your supportive review. I am truly half ditz as well!
Hugs, Trisha
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How human of you... see, a well-balanced person indeed!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I'm loving the neat rhymes here and the flow and better late than never is what i say! He he he, this is a fun write and I enjoyed the sentiments, I hope my review is not too late! He he he, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 12-May-2019
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I'm loving the neat rhymes here and the flow and better late than never is what i say! He he he, this is a fun write and I enjoyed the sentiments, I hope my review is not too late! He he he, love Dolly x
Comment Written 12-May-2019
reply by the author on 12-May-2019
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Thanks for your supportive review
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from karenina
I want you to know I voted for you to win because your poem was just so honest and written with a purity and lack of pretense that appealed to me.
Thus far I am your only vote but if I could hold a rally I would! (smile)--Karenina
reply by the author on 12-May-2019
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I want you to know I voted for you to win because your poem was just so honest and written with a purity and lack of pretense that appealed to me.
Thus far I am your only vote but if I could hold a rally I would! (smile)--Karenina
Comment Written 11-May-2019
reply by the author on 12-May-2019
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You are very kind. Yes, I am what I am, and I write from my heart.Thanks for your supportive review
Hugs, Trisha
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Keep being true to yourself...I want you to know it shines through and it affected me.--Karenina
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Hi, you?re very kind. I think being true to yourself is a slowly evolved process. It?s part of self actualization. I?m intrigued - in which New England town do you ?bloom?? I lived close to Burlington for years, and I miss the Fall colors.
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Western Mass...just a few miles outside of Amherst--home of Emily Dickinson! Beautiful here!--Karenina
